Fic: Breaking The Chain - Part 3 - R/L - NC-17

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Title: Breaking The Chain
Authors: roadstergal & kahvi
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make money from it - that would be the other gestalt entity. ;)
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post VIII.
Notes: This is part 3 of 4 - if you've not read the first two, you can find them here:
Part 1.
Part 2.

"He is human!" Lister yelled back, feeling tears in his eyes. "Damn you, he's human!"

Comments

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

*twitches*

notsane!Kryten is scareing me.

Also, I hate your cliffhangers and I think they should digh. I wish to petition for continuous downwards scrolling.And someone really needs to give that computer a swift kick. I mean, really, she has autopilot. She should just leave on her own and bugger off. =\

[merry-loon.livejournal.com]

Um... Yeah. I don't really know where to begin, seeing as I just spent the past hour and a half reading this entire arc. I generally don't read a lot of the fics posted in this community (Awful, yes, I know). I just get tired of reading sweet, funny, sexy even, but ultimately disappointing in that they don't go where they promise.

I was kind of blown away by this fic! You two really work well together. I was working on a fic tonight, but I took a break to check out my friends page and decided to read this fic.

I am so freaked out by Ace's Ship Computer!! But Kryten scares me more than that. He always did have the potential to be a homicidal, insane stalker-type of android, but you've really exploited that! Thanks, now whenever I watch Red Dwarf I'll be worrying that Kryten is going to kill Lister in his sleep. @_@

I'm paying attention now. I'm just not a very good fangirl sometimes. XD

I'll be watching for the next part. :)

[squiggle-bat.livejournal.com]

*whimper* Your mechanicals are freaky. Really freaky. The not-Arnold in particular was making me shudder. I'm torn, since they're scaring me enough that I probably shouldn't read these fics but at the same time I need to make sure noone's being crushed into a horribe, bloody pulp. Damn you and your cliffhangers!

Good thing you have the erotic interlude to save the day! Surely they can't be separated now, cos then they won't be able to have more mansex. I know you like the mansex... but you also like to make stories that stand in their own right as opposed to being purely vehicles of smut (sometimes...)

*whimpers a bit more*

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

Er ... I have read the majority of this part but I skimmed through it because I was at work. I've been quite naughty with not commenting on your recent fics but I shall ignore my mother screeching at me to come and have dinner to make a little comment.

From what I read properly, excellent. ;) As usual. I haven't read the sexeh because I was at work but I will do either tonight or tomorrow morning (doing more partying after dinner whee).

Uh ... yes. But you know I love your stuff, even if I do have to read it with alt+tab.

Hee!

Orange Rimmer is absolutely yucky. YUCKY! Evil prick. ;)

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Um....yeah...it just went even more sisnister at the end there. I hope Computer has something extraordinarily nasty waiting in the near future. And Kryten, well....I think VII threw his charecter out of any kind of sanity, he wasn't like this in VIII damn it! Or was he he just waiting, lurking in the shadows with some evil plan, huh? huh?! *cough*
You guys weren't kidding when you said this was a plot heavy fic. Well done you. And there is porn too!

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

OMG. OMG.

I think I'm ready to die from happiness. Just as soon as I finish the last chapter. notsane!Kryten is awesome/scary/expected. psycho!Computer is scary. Rimmer/Lister sex is, as always, awesome to the point of XD. And Orange!Rimmer really needed someone to fix him. He was evil, and insane, but he really did deserve better.

*runs off to finish it all*