Fic: Breaking The Chain. Part 4. NC-17.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Title: Breaking The Chain
Authors: kahvi & roadstergal
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make money from it - oh well.
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post VIII.
Notes: This is part 4 of 4. If you've not read the first three, you can find them here:
Part 1.
Part 2.
Part 3.


This is an unacceptable outcome.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank god it's here...you and your cliffhangers.

Rimmer hovered at a constant distance, like a neurotic vulture who is watching a mortally wounded impala play Parcheesi.

What a lovely, lovely image.

But he still was not angry with Lister. No, just - numb

That is just so sad. Damn that Kryten! And Rimmer, when will he learn? Some space hero too, what has to happen until he senses something is wrong?

If Rimmer had not been occupied with brooding, he might have noticed the madness in Kryten's voice. But he was, and he did not - not until Kryten advanced, duster raised, on Rimmer, and started to dust his head with intense concentration. "What the smeg is wrong with you?" Rimmer barked, dancing back.

Indeed. That crazy cleaning is really scary, but Kryten dusting Rimmer is just such hilarious image!

She would stay to watch him die

Mommy. Me scared now. Very scared.

Who was 'she?' What did 'she' have to do with the ship blowing up?

Captain oblivious. Really, Arn.

Rimmer bit his tongue very solidly at the sight of her, looking highly undressed and highly just-sexed

*bangs head against table* He still doesn't get it?!

The Computer's voice had moved to a pitch that would make phone-sex workers weep. "Remedial measures taken. Outcome unacceptable." Rimmer shivered at the coldness of the words and the heat of the voice

*snort* I like the contrast,'s nice.

Someone drugged you, stripped you naked, and plopped you in bed with Kochanski?

Ok. I think I'm gonna bang his head against the table for a bit.

Cat blushed. Rugged-features sure was a smooth talker!

Oh, you just gotta love Cat. I love the fact he just slept through the whole thing. I kinda suspected.

That was before the insane mechanoid and the homicidal computer and the ship almost blown up and all."

Lister nodded. He'd figured it would have been something like that.

Brilliant!

"Hey, they're not a sex handle, ya know!"

Ahhhh! Sex handle!!!!

Madras sause! *ahem*
I seem to have run even longer then previously. Love how the story played out - lovely ending, happy but not flufy, you know? Nice resolution with the Cat thing, very funny. The Computer is still scary, but at least she is no longer homosidal.Oh, and the sex bit was...yeah. Wonderful fic guys. I just gotta ask, are there more adventures in store?

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

Guh. Wow. I think I'm going to have to print this out and reread it again, just to catch all of the details.

You two pwn the internets. Totally. (I'll write a more coherent review later, when the shock of OMG it's over! wears off...)

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

"Hey, they're not a sex handle, ya know!"
Aahahaaha~! A very familiar and brilliant line, i must say!

Ha! So, all's well that ends well. A rather please ending with humour and some warm fuzzies. And Ace!Kochanski, what a brillant idea O_O

I am impressed. Best story ever. :hearts:

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

Whee! I've finally read it all properly. Lengthy comments shall be created on another day however.

Oh, I love my boys. I do, I do, I do! They're so pretty! *sigh* Heh. Loved the Cat in this. Too good.

Anyway, well done kiddies. I may just have to print this out and read it in my bed tonight.

;) Whee!

[veronica-rich.livejournal.com]

I've just finished reading all four parts of this, and I have to say, you two did a really, really good job here. I love the plottiness, the snarkiness, yes even the right amoung of angst and drama. The characterizations were fabulous.

And that bit with the sex in the blue uniform ... oh, those trousers have made me quite happy watching him prance and run about in them onscreen. Good to see Dave also appreciates what they do for his ass and legs. ;-)