ext_195746 ([identity profile] smaych.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2007-09-13 11:37 am

Drabble: Frustration - PG

Title: Frustration
Rating: PG
Disclaimer:I don't own Red Dwarf or make any money from this (or anything else at the moment!).
Notes: I hope I'm getting this right. I read "Surrender" by the great [livejournal.com profile] khavi, and thought I'd give 100 words a go.



Lister didn't know what irritated him more. The ridiculously bright, primary-coloured pvc outfits. The smug, know-it-all attitude. The daily I-outrank-you lecture. The hours spent in front of the mirror faffing over a smegging hairdo.

The way Lister sometimes caught himself staring a little too long.

The fact that what he couldn't touch for so long, he would never be allowed to touch anyway. The fact that, despite everything, he had started to make an effort to clean up after himself in a futile attempt to impress.

Or the fact that, after all, she wasn't Rimmer.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*applauds*

Oh, bravo! Brilliantly done! More, please! :D

[identity profile] queen-fiend.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I really enjoyed that. Nice work! :)
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[identity profile] idontlikegravy.livejournal.com 2008-08-09 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this was great! Just found you via your nomination in [livejournal.com profile] forsaken_fandom and I'm really glad I did!