Very good. I usually don't like pining!Rimmer, but that bit when Lister is sick in C&P is a moment when you see the Smeghead barrier crack, and you see the smegheaded, misguided caring come out. I think you got that well.

I was still getting used to being incorporeal, not that I'd ever been one of those girly touchy-feely types anyway. In fact, with the company I was keeping I wasn't sure that being unable to touch anything wasn't a good thing.

Rimmer!

I have dreams sometimes where I'm soft light again. In them I'm surrounded by goits who won't do what I say and I feel as helpless and impotent as I did back then.

*sigh*

I tried everything to distract myself - salutes, necrobics

*giggle*

He did this - put himself in danger, became ill, and dismissed it all, just so he could go curl up in her bed like a character from one of those sappy romantic films he watches. Pathetic.

Rimmer!

Doesn't he think about anyone other than himself for a single microsecond?

Rimmer!