ext_17828 ([identity profile] vejgeta9.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2012-02-07 11:25 am
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Help!! I'm writing rp slash, and I need help!! The issue: I'm crap at writing sex scenes. It's like I can't get them to feel... real. It's like they come out strained, or fake. It's a C/C fic. I haven't gotten to that section yet, but it would be nice to have a beta, I guess. Craig has had a shower scene with himself, and that turned out better than I thought. And my last fic was, for a lack of a better word, crap. Sure, it was funny crap, but it was still crap. Too much going on. So, help me!!
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[identity profile] janamelie.livejournal.com 2012-02-07 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I see. I was going by what Kahvi and Roadstergal did with their (amazing) series. :)
laurenthemself: Rainbow rose with words 'love as thou wilt' below in white lettering (Default)

[personal profile] laurenthemself 2012-02-08 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe I told them something different? I'm not sure now.

[identity profile] janamelie.livejournal.com 2012-02-08 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
If I remember rightly, it was Fiareynne who handled it. This was way back in 2006; I read the discussion in the archives.
laurenthemself: Rainbow rose with words 'love as thou wilt' below in white lettering (RD: The Kiss.)

[personal profile] laurenthemself 2012-02-08 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Crap, and she's not around much any more. I'll ping her on Twitter. Thanks!
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