[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Damn, girl - you can write! *wipes a tear*
That was not just good fanfic, that was good writing, period. And so angsty and romantic. If I wasn't writing something positive just now, I'd have to, just to make Lister happy again. *sniff* Ahh... *sniff* Hehehe...
lyr: (Goddess: lanning)

[personal profile] lyr 2006-02-08 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Yum! You have some really lovely detail work there, and also some good character exploration. The angst of the ending is wonderfully done without being over-done, too.

[identity profile] lady-draco.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant mate. Lovely bit of angst at the end. =) Splendid *squee*

[identity profile] roxulasbride.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 08:25 am (UTC)(link)
*sob*