This is so good. And so intimidating. You write the way I wish I could. The anger in this, and the realness - excellent. Gave me shivers, and made me mentally cheer Rimmer on. Very dark, but a good dark, a promising dark, if you will.
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That was a dream of mine, I know it.
And mine! Ahem. Sorry. ;)
and then buggered me until I thought I would make a dent in the bunk.
*garfgle* (About as coherent as I can get about that.)
I do not have a heart to break, any more than a toaster or a spacesuit or a toilet bowl. The thing in my chest that feels like it's breaking is a computer simulation of a heart, and if it fails completely, you know that the guarantee is still valid. You can trade me in on a better model, or just get your money back, isn't that right?
Ouch. Gods, how I wished he'd actually said this... The thing is, Lister does take Rimmer for granted. I mean, he can be nice to him from time to time, and yeah, Rimmer can be a pain to be around, but a lot of the time the above quite susinctly sums up Listers view of Rimmer, sadly...
who has followed you past death twice, through the stars, through other realities, like an irritating rash that will not go away.
Heh. Oh yeah. Tell him! Hehe... I swear, I get too involved in these things...
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This is so good. And so intimidating. You write the way I wish I could. The anger in this, and the realness - excellent. Gave me shivers, and made me mentally cheer Rimmer on. Very dark, but a good dark, a promising dark, if you will.
Comments!
That was a dream of mine, I know it.
And mine! Ahem. Sorry. ;)
and then buggered me until I thought I would make a dent in the bunk.
*garfgle* (About as coherent as I can get about that.)
I do not have a heart to break, any more than a toaster or a spacesuit or a toilet bowl. The thing in my chest that feels like it's breaking is a computer simulation of a heart, and if it fails completely, you know that the guarantee is still valid. You can trade me in on a better model, or just get your money back, isn't that right?
Ouch. Gods, how I wished he'd actually said this... The thing is, Lister does take Rimmer for granted. I mean, he can be nice to him from time to time, and yeah, Rimmer can be a pain to be around, but a lot of the time the above quite susinctly sums up Listers view of Rimmer, sadly...
who has followed you past death twice, through the stars, through other realities, like an irritating rash that will not go away.
Heh. Oh yeah. Tell him! Hehe... I swear, I get too involved in these things...
Good! Great and good. Grood!
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That was so sad and angsty and made me get all teary eyed. *hits you* But it was so beautifully written. Lovely.
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