aaangyl.livejournal.com (
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2006-05-28 07:40 pm (UTC)
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*WORSHIP*
Oh WONDERFUL. WONDERFUL FABULOUS EEEEE.
Only critical thing I might say is that some of the doubled re-flashing of scenes at the end feels a bit overdone/redundant. Maybe smaller, more subliminal things there instead?
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Oh WONDERFUL. WONDERFUL FABULOUS EEEEE.
Only critical thing I might say is that some of the doubled re-flashing of scenes at the end feels a bit overdone/redundant. Maybe smaller, more subliminal things there instead?