Fic: Breaking The Chain, Part 2. R/L. PG-13.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Title: Breaking The Chain
Authors: kahvi & roadstergal
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG-13 (for this part).
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make any money at all from it, more's the pity.
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post-VIII.
Notes: If you haven't read Part I, start there.

Sure there's not a bit of Cat in you?

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Oooooohhh, story :P

The entire ceiling had been scrubbed clean, sprayed with pine-scented air-freshener, and whitewashed

ROFL *ahem* Oh yes, nothing wrong here, 'sall just perfectly normal thank you.

"My butter is..." his voice cracked. He caught it. "Bread isn't buttered... er... the side with the bread..." Wasn’t there a bloody phrase to use in this context?

My lord that was funny! The whole concept is great by the way, but this line is just...*shakes head* Poor Rimsy...He is just too cute when he's all confused and backed into a corner like this.

He bade a regretful farewell to his sex drive

Yes, indeed, poor thing.

Rimmer would eat his wig

You've used this a few times now, I think it's a lovely line.

Miss... er... Computer, ma'am

Yeeaaaahhhh

slightly nervously wondering if his boots would polish themselves if he kept them on the floor long enough

Hahaha, so Lister. And, yeah, scary.

Yes, very scary indeed. I *ahem* appologize for the lengty comments but there are so many great bits. Again the Computer was great - completely f**** insane. I love the idea that as inasne as Kryten has gone he wouldn't actually intentionally hurt Rimmer.
Alternate Rimmer is just so eerie, the tension there is palpable (don't wanna even contemplate what he has really done to his shipsmates, nope, my mind not going there at all).
Way to end on a cliffhager! Evil *hisses at you* More please?

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

The damn chapter ended again! It's an epidemic!
God. Orange. Orange! That's just not Rimmer's colour. ^^;

Awesomeness. Want the next chapter soon though; orange!Rimmer isn't allowed to triumph! =|Nor is nuts!Kryten and spacecrazy!Computer.

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

Okee - guys, you know it is football tomorrow so this is going to be a tiny comment.

Lovely. And you know the rest from the emaily thing.

*salutes, waves flag*

Aussie, Aussie, Aussie (?)

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

Oh dear. There's a lot in this chapter. How about I just say I loved the entire thing? Cat!seduction is wonderful. Awkward!Rimmer/Lister in the morning. Psycho!Kryten-whitewashing-ceilings is scary. Psycho!Computer needs to get a different Ace. Immediately. Without killing this one. Orange!Rimmer needs to leave my head. Now. Before I end up going with a he killed the entire crew because Lister wasn't in love with him in his universe!

Dude. You guys rock.