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reddwarfslashTitle: Breaking The Chain
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kahvi & roadstergal
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG-13 (for this part).
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make any money at all from it, more's the pity.
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post-VIII.
Notes: If you haven't read Part I, start there.
Sure there's not a bit of Cat in you?
Authors:
kahvi & roadstergalPairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG-13 (for this part).
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make any money at all from it, more's the pity.
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post-VIII.
Notes: If you haven't read Part I, start there.
Sure there's not a bit of Cat in you?
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Date: 2006-06-21 10:48 pm (UTC)The entire ceiling had been scrubbed clean, sprayed with pine-scented air-freshener, and whitewashed
ROFL *ahem* Oh yes, nothing wrong here, 'sall just perfectly normal thank you.
"My butter is..." his voice cracked. He caught it. "Bread isn't buttered... er... the side with the bread..." Wasn’t there a bloody phrase to use in this context?
My lord that was funny! The whole concept is great by the way, but this line is just...*shakes head* Poor Rimsy...He is just too cute when he's all confused and backed into a corner like this.
He bade a regretful farewell to his sex drive
Yes, indeed, poor thing.
Rimmer would eat his wig
You've used this a few times now, I think it's a lovely line.
Miss... er... Computer, ma'am
Yeeaaaahhhh
slightly nervously wondering if his boots would polish themselves if he kept them on the floor long enough
Hahaha, so Lister. And, yeah, scary.
Yes, very scary indeed. I *ahem* appologize for the lengty comments but there are so many great bits. Again the Computer was great - completely f**** insane. I love the idea that as inasne as Kryten has gone he wouldn't actually intentionally hurt Rimmer.
Alternate Rimmer is just so eerie, the tension there is palpable (don't wanna even contemplate what he has really done to his shipsmates, nope, my mind not going there at all).
Way to end on a cliffhager! Evil *hisses at you* More please?
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Date: 2006-06-21 11:07 pm (UTC)Speaking of C, she does write an AMAZING Computer, doesn't she? I'm going to be bold enough and claim credit for having come up with the basic seed of an idea for this story, but she just took it and ran with it, turning it into pure distilled amazing. Ness. Amazingness.
It's hard to know how to divide these things sometimes, but I always suggest upping the tension by adding cliffhangers. ;) Alternate Rimmer gave me the creeps too - that action sequence was hella-fun to write!
Thank ye kindly, glad you're enjoying it. :)
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Date: 2006-06-22 12:09 am (UTC)Oh, yes, more to come! :D
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Date: 2006-06-22 02:14 am (UTC)God. Orange. Orange! That's just not Rimmer's colour. ^^;
Awesomeness. Want the next chapter soon though; orange!Rimmer isn't allowed to triumph! =|Nor is nuts!Kryten and spacecrazy!Computer.
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Date: 2006-06-22 05:39 am (UTC)Ach, that was a dimension that did not have Howard Burden. What a deprived dimension.
Thankee for feedback! Well, wait and see. :)
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Date: 2006-06-22 09:52 am (UTC)Orange Rimmer is scary, yes. He scared me, that I do know...
There'll be more tomorrow; watch this space!
Thank you for the lovely feedback; glad you're enjoying it. :D
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Date: 2006-06-22 12:22 pm (UTC)I'm being haunted by orange!Rimmer. I keep randomly thinking of him suddenly when i'm doing something unrelated.
*doing dishes* Man, Rimmer's shoulder must hurt...
*playing with nephew* I wonder what orange!Rimmer did to the rest of his crew?
*walking to store* o_O I wonder if orange!Rimmer had a thing for the Lister from his dimension? O_O I wonder if his Lister was like him? ARGH STOP THINKING ABOUT A FIK IN THE MAIN STREET OF TOWN! "No, ma'am, i'm not crazy, just frustrated, sorry, you and your children can carry on down the street now." ^^;
=P
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Date: 2006-06-22 12:51 pm (UTC)It's really amazing to hear that we are able to evoke that level of interest in other people too though! *blush*
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Date: 2006-06-23 04:12 am (UTC)You shouldn't DO THAT! Oh MAN!
Now i'm going to end up stareing at it all day and thinking about orange!Rimmer!!
T_T
Damnit, why has he obsessed me?
Oh, man. Orange!
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Date: 2006-06-22 09:52 am (UTC)Lovely. And you know the rest from the emaily thing.
*salutes, waves flag*
Aussie, Aussie, Aussie (?)
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Date: 2006-06-23 10:30 pm (UTC)Dude. You guys rock.
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Date: 2006-06-24 09:36 am (UTC)We love feedback!
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