ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-06-23 12:31 pm

Fic: Breaking The Chain. Part 4. NC-17.

Title: Breaking The Chain
Authors: [livejournal.com profile] kahvi & [livejournal.com profile] roadstergal
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make money from it - oh well.
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post VIII.
Notes: This is part 4 of 4. If you've not read the first three, you can find them here:
Part 1.
Part 2.
Part 3.


This is an unacceptable outcome.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-06-24 09:51 am (UTC)(link)
More lenghty comments! *runs around in excited circles*

Oh, I'm glad you liked the alternate computer personality. I wasn't sure how well I'd pulled that off. Well then, hurrah!

Mmm... Trousers... Wha? What were you saying?

Glad you liked the Cat-bit! I wanted to end it with the resolution of that oblivious!Cat joke, and it seems to have worked well.

And yes, of course sexhandlebraids. I mean, with Rimmer pulling on them like that? I think [livejournal.com profile] roadstergal might have set it up to make me make Lister say it, actually. If so, much kudos to her!

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. It brings me much joy. :D
ext_3665: (love handle)

[identity profile] zekkass.livejournal.com 2006-06-24 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Reviews are the lifeblood of a writer. Of course I should put effort into long ones for fic this good!

It's a pity the alternate computer never was in the show itself. He would have been fun to see!

*joins you in getting distracted by the trousers*

The Cat realizing what he had done in the end was a lot funnier than him being oblivious. And you gave us the bonus image of Cat in the shower. XD

*sends kudos to [livejournal.com profile] roadstergal even if she didn't set it up like that. She deserves them just for writing with you!*

Glad I could contribute! ;)

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-06-25 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
She deserves them just for writing with you!
Ain't that the truth! I'm very blessed indeed. :)