[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I saw it! Then again, I also saw R/L. :p
I swear, I'd see R/L if there was just a sentence saying "Rimmer and Lister were in a room."

He spun, invective flinging away like mud off of a spinning bicycle tire.
And that sentence is as graceful as he is. Smoooth!

Not that fights were a good thing, as such, but they took something out of you
Yeah, my boy. :)

"we ain't going to turn into dogs for you, buddy."
Nice. And true.

Loving these! It's so perfect to have you write VI! :D