Fic: Cleanup, Part 1. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

A two-parter, with R/L implications, eventually.

Lister, don't make me come out and smash that one, too!

Written for fanfic100. Little Damn Table.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Can't wait to read the rest of this, as you ended on a bit of a cliffhanger. you know, I never really gave that much thought to why they had lost Red Dwarf's vapour trail. Interesting.

The opening with Lister little piece of quite beeing ruined by Rimmer was lovely.
As is they new guitar. Of course, Lister must have a guitar.

"Oh, my apologies, Mister Lister! I think your chord started a bit of resonance that shorted out my cognitive functions."

Hehehe, brilliant!

written a love ballad right then and there

Did he indeed?

Kryten nodded, his face looking like a set of Legos was about to cry

What a lovely line! I can see it too.
Charming pirates. Very Kryten like.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thank ye! I'm trying to structure this one like an episode of VI - you can determine, at the end, if I've succeeded.

Ja, it just made sense to me that they lost it with all of the mucking about to find Rimmer...