Beast, Part 2. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Part two of three. Part 1 here.

"Don't try to sell us out to save your skinny arse."

Crit is always good. Written for fanfic100. Little Damn Table.

Comments

[day221b.livejournal.com]

Ack! This story has me hooked! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with for the next part.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I enjoy hooking. :D

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

A liquid beast? Marvelous!
Poor Rimsy. Well, Lister will get him back somehow. Right? *glare*

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Hee! Yep. Well... not exactly. *typing*

[musicisavictim.livejournal.com]

This is some straight up startrek shit. So is the entire lake sentient? Did it just solidify part of itself for defense or exploration? Good idea with the part where although Rimmer went to soft light the beast dragged away his lightbee.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

You know, I hadn't thought about it, but ja, it is kind of like that tar beast that eats Yar. Heh. But it's a bit different in conception and motive.

Thanks for the feedback! The last bit is in progress.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

You know, I still haven't seen that ep. She was my favourite character next to Data. :(

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

I loved Yar. I was so pissed to see her go.

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

Suspensseee. *dashes off to read the next part*

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

*raises eyebrow suspiciously*

You're not killing Rimmer again, are you? ;))

"That sounded hungry, bud, and I know I'm tasty,"
Great Cat.

It frustrated him to no end, seeing the man so stubbornly refuse to be anything other than a smeghead.
Amen. That's it right there. But it's easy for Lister to say, isn't it?

"Lister, what the smeg are you doing?"
*mimics* "Liiisteehr, what the smeeg are ye doiing!"

*smacks Lister* Oi, you; behave!

left-part armpit-hair
Nice one. I know they're hard to come up with!

in his moments of extreme honesty, he had to confess to himself that maybe he wasn't really a better guitar player than the love child of Eddie Van Halen and Mark Knopfler
Aaah... That's my boy. *cuddles him* :)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, good - I always worry about writing from Lister's POV.

You bastard! You killed Rimmer for the umpteenth time! *snrt*

Hee - "Craig, stop muckin' about!" I love that because it's so rare you hear him actually speak like himself - er, but this is segueing into the evil thing.