ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-08-20 12:55 pm
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Fic: Return, part 3. PG.

Part 3 of many. Links to previous parts in the fic. Spoilers for the whole Red Dwarf enchilada.

"I just want... to know."

Crit is always good.

[identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com 2006-08-20 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*suspicious*
Should I have a box of tissues on standby for the next one?
Ah, yes, alternate Lister. So sweet and yet so very wrong.

cultural..." Lister waved his hand vaguely, "things she enjoyed

That's certainly isn't our Listy.
As for Rimmer....Positive reinforcement is ever so useful. Now write more!

[identity profile] kirstyfromflat5.livejournal.com 2006-08-20 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I always did wonder what happened to the Lister that Kochanski left behind. Poor guy :(
ext_3665: (Love is...)

[identity profile] zekkass.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
*jaw drop* Oh. So that's where you're going. Poor AU!Lister...

..This is where I realize that you don't have any more out yet. T_T

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-08-28 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hell, she was an electronic lifeform; they should be able to interface, somehow, shouldn't they? But he had not yet had the nerve to bring it up.
Oh dear god... Bunny...

We have to graduate you to important missions soon, for the good of the universe
"Pfffhhh... Yeah. Good of the universe. Can't believe I used to buy that shite." I know Dave. I know. *sigh*

"She taught me to talk better
SHE MUST DIE! *ahem* *calms down* Phew. Right. Just a fic. Just a fic. *hugs self*

"I had loved her before, but man," Lister shook his head, his lip quivering, "I loved her so much more afterwards."
You know, this aspect of Alt!Kochanski and Alt!Lister has always worried me. I think there's a fic coming there. I mean, Rimmer and Lister influenced one another in subtle ways, and were perhaps the better for it... But the sort of complete turn-around this Lister seems to have done for his Kochanski? It seems to be entirely one-sided, and that is not a good thing.

Great Holly in the end. :)