ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-09-16 02:23 pm
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Fic: Resurrection. PG.

I had a mental image, and did not know what to do with it - until a conversation in [livejournal.com profile] kahvi's journal.

Gapfiller for Nanarchy. Spoilers up to there.

"Yer my Rimmer, aren't you?"

Crit is always good. Written for [livejournal.com profile] fanfic100. Little Damn Table.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Heaven, I'm in heaven
And my heart beats so that I can hardly speak
And I seem to find the happiness I seek
I've got several million Rimmer's cheek to cheek!


Been looking forward to this one - glad to see it! :)

As usual, much love. I would have liked some more details, and perhaps a slower build-up (look, I'm trying to concrit; it's hard!), but then again I've already written a version of this scenario in my mind, and I'm probably comparing it to that. And, of course, it is a dream, which would impact the telling of it. (See? Hard.)

I love the detail of his arm not being fixed before he did this. It's a lovely touch.

Can I just say that I really like the word "miasma"?

This one had very green eyes and a hard-planed, unscarred face.
I'd get slightly distracted in this room, I think.

OMGWTF "Spanky". Mmffph...

He grabbed two that were snogging, pulled them apart, then pushed them back together. Not his Rimmer, either of them.
This was a surprise??

Rimmer's head dropped, and Lister pressed his lips to the hologram's, running his tongue along the man's lips.
This is where I started getting suspicious. It's never that easy!

"Lucky bastard," one muttered. "Which one?"
*giggle*

Heee - turtleneck!

Nicely done, ma'am!

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
The frantic goes well with Lister's mood; it works much better while he's running around, methinks. I just love that image... Running around, looking for his Rimmer. That was another nice touch, just catching his eye, and knowing.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, and also; since he didn't get to actually go through with the plan at any point, I'd wager he'd try it again post VIII, once they escaped. I mean, seeing (and then losing) ressurected!Rimmer would have been enough of an encouragement, no?