ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-09-30 05:55 pm
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Exit Reality. Part 1 of 2. PG.

A fic set in a AU where the hallucination in Back To Reality was reality. This is a bit of a thought experiment - poking at how characters with fundamentals of the four folk might have ended up where they did when they 'emerged from the game.' Crit very welcome.

"It's a little late for traffic concerns, innit?"

[identity profile] iris-summers.livejournal.com 2006-10-01 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
*sneaking out from the shadows of lurkerdom*

Great exploration of the AU. I love how you're delving into the universe of Back To Reality, and the little details of how Sebastian couldn't quite recognize Jake, his sort of grudging consideration about Billy, his half-brother, his self-justification about the work he does, etc. It's a very believable 1984-ish society that you've portrayed. Definitely hoping that you'll expand further on this fic. Cheers!