Fic: Recalled. NC-17.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Title: Recalled
Authors: kahvi and roadstergal
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17, for this part (6 of 6).
Disclaimer: We do not own them, and we make no money from this.
Note: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5. This part takes place during and after Out Of Time; spoilers through there.

"Wha, the EPGC? They sent me a letter. I tore it up."

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[noirenails.livejournal.com]

Yay :D My, has this been a good morning ...just a few quotes before I comment on the entire fic:

- Had they belonged to anyone else, the poetically inclined might be moved to describe them as butterflies, but in this case... well, moths, perhaps.
Hee! I love sentences like that :D You both put such delightful sentences in their minds. One of my favourites ever is "Wonderful. He was about to kiss a smug-faced gimboid, and his boots were dull." in Catcall pt 1.

- The Space Corps Directives were very clear on subordinates following the instructions of superior officers during illicit unions, but they had nothing to suggest for when the superior officer had no smegging clue what he was supposed to be doing.
Oh, Rimmer. I do love you.

- "Yes, I'm full of party tricks," Rimmer muttered, looking down at himself.
Heeehehehe :D

- a somewhat crimson-shaded Rimmer gave him a curt, but meaningful nod as he went to join the Cat for cockpit duty.
*embarrassing "aww" sounds*

- "Do women really like sock suspenders, or was it just the other-me?"
Hey, I like them! Don't really know why, though. Perhaps they're like garters on men. On other news, this whole scene is burning hot <33

- He stroked it a few times, letting himself enjoy it, making sure Rimmer saw. Yes, the hologram did; he was licking his lips as he stared at it
...hell, yes.

- "I'm going to go rob a bank," Rimmer replied, with certainty.
*grin!*

- Rimmer quietly and carefully slid out of the bunk, and started to shuffle through the abysmal mess on Lister's dresser, looking for his camera. Blackmail opportunities of this magnitude never came twice.
Oh god, my love for this man knows no boundaries :D

..."just a few quotes" my arse. Ah well. You know already that I really, really love this fic :) It's completely lovely and hot and I could see it happening. And the fact that all the six parts of it happen so... continuously during the actual series is just wonderful. And you make the boys so in character, it's almost scary!

You really managed to make my Sunday morning very, very enjoyable. Thank you :)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Ha, the moths bit was one I pointed out to Kat as a line of hers I particularly liked.

I'm not big on sock suspenders, but you know those straps men used to wear to keep their shirt-sleeves in order? You see Jeeves wearing them in the first Fry/Laurie ep of Jeeves and Wooster. Please tell me they have a name. Well, I have a weakness for shirt sleeves, a vest, and those.

Support Garments And The Women Who Love Them. Yeesh.

*blush* Aw, thanks again!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I have no idea what they're called either, but couldn't you totally see Craig wearing that?

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Their thoughts are funny. Writing them, alone or particulary in gestalt-fics is an odd sort of combination of acting, writing and roleplaying, because they do really come alive in your mind and dictate what needs to be said and done. You see things from their point of view, which can quite often be scary... But always fun!

Hawt yes, good gawd! I'm not gonna argue with ya. *wipes brow*

And you make the boys so in character, it's almost scary!
*blush* Thank you! That's very important to me - it's one of the main reasons I started writing in this fandom; there were so many fics out there that I felt were OOC.

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!