Fic: Recalled. NC-17.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Title: Recalled
Authors: kahvi and roadstergal
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17, for this part (6 of 6).
Disclaimer: We do not own them, and we make no money from this.
Note: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5. This part takes place during and after Out Of Time; spoilers through there.

"Wha, the EPGC? They sent me a letter. I tore it up."

Comments

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

Mmm ... mansex. Twice!

:)

Hokay, that was like insanely hawt. Quite a lot of bits in there made me laugh. Especially Rimmer fainting. *snort* That was funny. Hehehe.

Now, I think there should be much more of these, posted regularly (ie: every day) so that I can get my nice dose of the mansex.

Whee!

Well done as usual, you two =D

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Yes, you must arrange for daily hot mansex to be posted. :D

Aw, thanks, mate; glad you liked!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Mansex: So nice, we made them do it twice. Well. It wasn't really a matter of having to force them. ;)

There might be some more mansex posted today. *nods* That you helped make!

Thank youuuu! :D

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Guh... Hawtness...
That was great. Sweet ending. And chained and oiled Rimmer. (sorry I can't be more coherent right now)

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Hawtness indeed... I'm glad you enjoyed reading it; I enjoyed writing it. :)

Thank you!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Hee! Aw, thanks much; no coherency required for intent to come across!

[noirenails.livejournal.com]

Yay :D My, has this been a good morning ...just a few quotes before I comment on the entire fic:

- Had they belonged to anyone else, the poetically inclined might be moved to describe them as butterflies, but in this case... well, moths, perhaps.
Hee! I love sentences like that :D You both put such delightful sentences in their minds. One of my favourites ever is "Wonderful. He was about to kiss a smug-faced gimboid, and his boots were dull." in Catcall pt 1.

- The Space Corps Directives were very clear on subordinates following the instructions of superior officers during illicit unions, but they had nothing to suggest for when the superior officer had no smegging clue what he was supposed to be doing.
Oh, Rimmer. I do love you.

- "Yes, I'm full of party tricks," Rimmer muttered, looking down at himself.
Heeehehehe :D

- a somewhat crimson-shaded Rimmer gave him a curt, but meaningful nod as he went to join the Cat for cockpit duty.
*embarrassing "aww" sounds*

- "Do women really like sock suspenders, or was it just the other-me?"
Hey, I like them! Don't really know why, though. Perhaps they're like garters on men. On other news, this whole scene is burning hot <33

- He stroked it a few times, letting himself enjoy it, making sure Rimmer saw. Yes, the hologram did; he was licking his lips as he stared at it
...hell, yes.

- "I'm going to go rob a bank," Rimmer replied, with certainty.
*grin!*

- Rimmer quietly and carefully slid out of the bunk, and started to shuffle through the abysmal mess on Lister's dresser, looking for his camera. Blackmail opportunities of this magnitude never came twice.
Oh god, my love for this man knows no boundaries :D

..."just a few quotes" my arse. Ah well. You know already that I really, really love this fic :) It's completely lovely and hot and I could see it happening. And the fact that all the six parts of it happen so... continuously during the actual series is just wonderful. And you make the boys so in character, it's almost scary!

You really managed to make my Sunday morning very, very enjoyable. Thank you :)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Ha, the moths bit was one I pointed out to Kat as a line of hers I particularly liked.

I'm not big on sock suspenders, but you know those straps men used to wear to keep their shirt-sleeves in order? You see Jeeves wearing them in the first Fry/Laurie ep of Jeeves and Wooster. Please tell me they have a name. Well, I have a weakness for shirt sleeves, a vest, and those.

Support Garments And The Women Who Love Them. Yeesh.

*blush* Aw, thanks again!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I have no idea what they're called either, but couldn't you totally see Craig wearing that?

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Their thoughts are funny. Writing them, alone or particulary in gestalt-fics is an odd sort of combination of acting, writing and roleplaying, because they do really come alive in your mind and dictate what needs to be said and done. You see things from their point of view, which can quite often be scary... But always fun!

Hawt yes, good gawd! I'm not gonna argue with ya. *wipes brow*

And you make the boys so in character, it's almost scary!
*blush* Thank you! That's very important to me - it's one of the main reasons I started writing in this fandom; there were so many fics out there that I felt were OOC.

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!

[tawg.livejournal.com]

Forgive me, I think I've quoted damn near the whole thing...

He remembered something that Frank had laughingly said to Howard while elbowing him in the ribs.
Yay for mentioning Rimmer’s family. I mean, the rest of the Rimmer herd shaped who he is so much. It’s good that you worked them into this… trying time of Arnie’s.

Lister leaned down again to lick it, wanting to lick every part of the man in turn. He'd need some sort of chart to check them off, so as not to miss anything.
Proof that Rimmer has been an active influence on Lister. Of course, if it were Rimmer making the chart it’d all be divinely shaded with such painstaking detail that Lister would’ve passed on and been brought back as a hologram by the time it was finished… and that would require a whole new chart.

They looked like liquorice treats, or panic buttons, or...
Oh, this bit really kind of hit home Lister’s under nourishment and Rimmer’s concern. Panic buttons indeed.

"I have to make fun of you... for something. Since I'm a smeghead."
Once again, a very apt summary of Rimmer’s character, and his purpose. I think Rimmer’s consistent criticisms and jibes do drive Lister to prove himself, to make use of his potential… and give him an eating disorder. *smacks Rimmer*

give the git a goited clue
Oh, try saying that when you’re drunk.

It was generally agreed that Rimmer's body was not one meant for display
The boy needs to start spending time on CBP.

Lister wanted his balls to match his uniform?
Made of velour?

There was no taste there, either, and that body glistening with simulated sweat
Oh God’s yes. I really adore how you’ve played with Rimmer’s hologramatic status. It all seems very… probably I guess. You don’t give his body any attributes that don’t make sense, like his projection tasting of something.

Holograms hovered uncertainly outside doors, biting nails that would re-grow even before the bitten-off fragments hit the floor in a shower of tiny blue sparks.

That’s a beautiful image, it says so much without actually, y’know, saying it.

AJ Rimmer, intrepid commander! Not Smeghead, chained to a post and having his libido tweaked by Lister


The EPGC was hilarious. And it was good because it was true to their individual senses of humour, but with all the aggravation removed. That was a very intimate scene, and it made sense damnit! The whole arc led up to that moment very smoothly, very delicately.

Aww, and then you hit us with Peterson angst! Bad! And by bad, I mean good. Because it’s written so well, and it explores the characters, and it’s quite a beautiful subplot. But it cancels out the warm fuzzies. Hear that? No fuzzies whatsoever!

... pleasewritemore.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Proof that Rimmer has been an active influence on Lister. Of course, if it were Rimmer making the chart it’d all be divinely shaded with such painstaking detail that Lister would’ve passed on and been brought back as a hologram by the time it was finished… and that would require a whole new chart.

Oh, god! You have to work this into a fic somewhere.

Oh, try saying that when you’re drunk.

*snrk* The next time Kat makes it over here, I will do just that.

That’s a beautiful image, it says so much without actually, y’know, saying it.

Ja, that was a Kat-bit - wasn't it lovely!

Honestly, I think that's what's at the basis of the whole R/L thing; their interaction with just enough understanding between them to alleviate the aggravation.

Ach, thanks again for the lovely feedback!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I think I might have started something scary - I forgot to actually ask roadstergal about it, but I think she picked up on my "something-not-quite-rigth-about-Howard" reference and took it in a wonderfully disturbing direction. One of the things I love about writing like this. ;)

Made of velour
LMAO! I want to read yer fic!

Erm, I have written stories in which Rimmer does have a taste. *shrugs* Hard-light holography is good like that; it's not explained in detail, so you can get away with pretty much anything. I agree that no-taste sounds reasonable though. Depends on my mood. ;)

Thank you - the blue-sparks image was one of mine. :)

I really liked that moment too - I agree with you; it was comfortable (though not, perhaps, entirely) and happy, and had them laughing together. A prefect ending.

...Except for the Petersen angst. ;) Heh, no, it was planned that way. But you know, his forgetting had to be explained too. I don't like it when characters are just ignored. Take the ending of Twelfth Night, for example. Antonio follows Sebastian to Orsino, even though he knows he will probably get arrested doing so. They two are close friends, and a relationship between them is more than hinted at. He clearly cares very much for Sebastian, enough to risk his life. But when he is indeed arrested, we hear nothing more of him, as the play shifts focus to the happy couples that can now be together, and the siblings that are finally re-united. Does Antonio die? Does he spend the rest of his life in prison? How does he feel about Sebastian's marriage? We are never told, and I feel Shakespeare did this on purpose. Some stories are like that, he seems to say, and what of those abandonned characters?

*looks at above paragraph* Great, first I compare RD to Ibsen, now friggin' Shakespeare??

Mmm... Writing more... < /Homer Simpson>

Thank you! :D

[nessaancalime.livejournal.com]

I've finally gotten around to your newest epic :-) Love the stuff you write together. Still a bit foggy to me what happened three thousand years ago, but it is obviously a bit foggy to the boys too ::g::
Ah, finally someone letting Lister give in to his urges and tie Rimmer up for some oiling - there's no way that could not make an impression.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that's what happens when you erase your memory multiple times with dodgy machinery. Silly! *shakes head*

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for feeding back!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Sometimes, I give in to self-indulgence, especially when Kat is involved. :)

Thanks! Ja, it's a little murky. We did set it up to share a common past with the Listerworld AU, in terms of Rimmer hearing about Lister beating up Selby on leave when he hinted at something between L and R...

[nessaancalime.livejournal.com]

Aha! I thought I had heard about Rimmer hearing about this incident, and was actually thinking that it may be something from canon - until of course I remembered this was in another fic by you two :-)