Fic: Back - part 3 of 6 - NC-17

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Title: Back - part 3 of 6
Authors: roadstergal and kahvi
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17, for adult themes.
Disclaimer: We do not own them, and we make no money from this.
Note: This won't make much sense if you haven't read part 1 or part 2.

"I'm not one of those better-dead-than-humiliated, Sebbie. Humiliate me any day."


The song Billy hums.

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[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

*sniffle* You made me cry... I'm very cross with you both right now...

He looked at his hands and wondered if he would really miss having a brain

*snort* in a very creepy sort of way.

Sebastian had woken up some hours before Lister that morning

Eep, mommy. That whole split personality thing is muchos creepy. It's really good in a storytelling sort of way but make it stop now. Please?

It was almost a relief, to fall back into the role of a pathetic loser. It felt so natural, so right?

And why is that, I wonder?! Huh, Arn?!

"The last human alive and his dead hologrammatic space-hero companion? He-llo?"

Erm... Make perfect sense to me. Er... Yes.
The whole scene in the cell (damn that's the entire thing isn't it?) was beautiful and heartbreaking. The deep emotion involved is so tangible. Especially when the Lister-Sebastian thing comes into play. And the ending was just... Not the end, damnit! Now for the making it all better, and putting my world right side up again.

And brownie points for using the word kerfuffle.

[noirenails.livejournal.com]

"It's all I have to offer," Lister said, looking dead ahead. ... That he could offer. Bastard that he was.
That whole long paragraph is a thing of beauty <3

*almost bawls in unison with Lister and Billy D:*

because masturbation was unStately
Now, that is one of the things that baffle me the most in Doyleverse. How does a little personal pleasure make you less than good? And does the, er, State have peeping toms or such to keep on top of the things? ...though the sad thing is, I think, that some people still really think like this :P

Oh god, I love that fellatio scene! Really! Verily!

Billy kissed Sebastian, his mouth open. Sebastian kissed back, frantically, and Billy let him; he tried to focus on the softness of Sebastian's lips, the clean, toothpaste-like taste of the mouth as he licked it. Good feelings, those. They'd make good memories. He stroked Sebastian's cheek. That was pretty good, too.
*heart breaks for the umpteenth time*

<3

[laurenthemself]

You know, incest is supposed to be one of my squicks.

You broke one of my squicks, at least temporarily.

Now I'm just being squicked by the Doyleverse in general.

[typhonblue.livejournal.com]

Aw... *snif* *bawls*

So sad, so sweet. I really like how you wrote sebastian!Lister. And william!Rimmer has so much pathos.

I have some concrit for the story if you'd like it.

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

*stares at you both*

Boo to you!!!

That was lovely. And sad. And all emotionally emotional. Hmm. I haven't seen any sign of Duane yet so I am happy ;)

Keep going ... and going ... and going. Forever and ever I say.

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