Fic: Back - R/L - NC-17 - part 6 of 6

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Title: Back - part 6 of 6
Authors: kahvi and roadstergal
Rating: NC-17 for adult themes, a little sex, and a little beastiality.
Disclaimer: We do not own them, and we make no money from this.
Note: Part 1, part 2, part 3, part 4, and part 5.

Kochanski briefly and irrationally wondered if there was any way to make more copies.

Comments

[noirenails.livejournal.com]

First of all: d'awwww.

Secondly: oh Rimmer, you lovable n00b.

Because he was on a roll, Lister started to give a very, very urgent nod before Rimmer's words caught up with him.
Ahhaha :D

In her mind, thousands of gittish Rimmer-alternates whooped in triumphant glee at the fact that she could not take her eyes off him.
Oh, I love this bit.

...I won't be able to look at a surgical mask anymore without becoming thoroughly amused. Damn you.

The way, for that matter, he had kept looking at the living Arnold in prison when he thought no one saw, that lost look in his eyes...
Exactly what I've always been thinking! It's so obvious once you start paying attention to it (and before, even).

On a side note, now I realize why Kryten annoys me so often. He's just like my grandma, with all his mother hen qualities and such! Omg.

Rimmer yelped and stepped back quickly. "I didn't notice..."
I probably should be annoyed at the brief disturbance but I can't help being amused at my sweet, sweet space boys :) This must be love.

(I shall, in my mind, start calling this whole fic The Fellatio Fic :D ...oh yes. And what a fellatio it is. Um. I might need a moment to collect my sanity)

After all, this would not be about Lister and Rimmer shagging until the end of eternity.
I beg to differ.

Utterly lovely, and call me boring but I think I really like this chapter best :) It's so safe and familiar compared to the alternate reality and, well, Rimsy and Listy are really quite adorable. Also, hot. Very good job, both of you <3

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, you picked out a lot of good Kat-love there. ;) Including the VIII-looks. Yes, doesn't he spend a lot of time looking at Rimmer like he's looking for someone else in him (http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e204/holodonkeh/Pete%201/pete35.jpg)?

Fellatio Fic. We do our damndest.

And I will not call you boring.

Thanks for the feedback! :)

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm glad the nod thing worked! It was one of those things that I could see so vividly in my head, but wasn't quite sure how to translate into writing.

There's a reason why I wanted roadstergal to write Kryten for this. She comes up with stuff like that. I was floored. Genius. So my love for her Krytes.

Fellatio!! Hehehe... Yep. *mind drifts*

I beg to differ too; in fact I remember thinking just that when I read it. But it's Rimmer, what can you do? ;)

Thank you so much for your lovely comments - I'm glad you enjoyed the story!