FIC: Two Boys, PG

Title: Two Boys
Author: [livejournal.com profile] nice_girls_play
Rating: PG
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Spoilers: Dimension Jump, Stoke Me a Clipper, Back to Reality, speculation on Back to Earth, and -- if you squint -- a deleted scene from Rimmerworld.
Warning: First RD fic.
Summary: Lister imagines two boys on another Earth, in another time.



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"I found one dimension where we actually were brothers.."

The statement comes out of nowhere. Lister looks up from his magazine to where his new/old bunkmate is checking his 'H' in the mirror, frowing.

"What, seriously?" he asks, wincing at the sensory images of wavy brown hair and the reek of urine-soaked wool.

Rimmer nods, the two-tone blue and red uniform jacket shimmering under the light.

"It was based on a choice my brother John made when he was fifteen."

"What was that?"

"Whether or not to chop up our parents with an axe. " Tapered fingertips continue to toy with the edges of immovable brand. Lister wonders briefly why he bothered to fit himself with it once again, when the hard light remote that controlled Ace's bee could easily eliminate it.

"It might have been all right if Frank hadn't gotten in the way. He ended up burying the bits in the back garden between our mother's narcissas. The outpost authorities had to identify my father by his liver nodules and the metal plate in his pancreas."

Somehow, Lister doesn't doubt either for a second.

"There was no foster system on Io, so Howard and I were sent to Earth. Your father fostered me at age nine. Adopted me when I was ten. After he died, your grandmother raised us both."

"Not blood brothers then." He sighs, the image of Sebastian and Billy blissfully fading from his brain on a tsunami of squid's ink.

"Fortunately no."

"Fortunately?"

He leans down and over to look at Rimmer, gazing at their reflection in the mirror. Rimmer's eyes meet his briefly in the reflection then glance back down at the hands he needlessly washes in the sink, his lips tight.

"She found us in the garage, blowing off on the groundsels."

The mental image is... startling.

Lister's smirk unfolds slowly, like a flower's petals slowly peeling back; spreading herself open for sunlight.

"How old were we?"

"I was 21, home on leave from tech school. You would have been about 15."

Lister doesn't need to guess who the initiator was. His grin broadens even as Rimmer's sulk deepens.

Rimmer was already thirty when he met him, but it doesn't take much imagination to mentally recede those features to a youthful, adolescent appearance: all arms and legs and too much nose, curls out of control because Gran didn't waste money on pomade or styling wax. Or to put his own youthful adolescent self on top of him, with their pants around their knees, kissing and frotting on the concrete and dirt floor behind his gran's hopper. One of them -- himself -- eventually scuttling downward, getting grit, motor oil and pieces of rusted, stripped bolts and coils in unspeakable places just for a taste of...

Lister shifts on the bed, making a show of stretching his booted legs out across the top of the bunk. Rimmer scrubs his hands vigorously under the hot tap.

"Was he the one?"

"*The one*...?"

"The one who replaced you as Ace."

"No."

He doesn't bother to repeat the statement as a question. There's something under the tight exterior that tells him he's on shaky ground; too shaky to even warrant his prodding.

He gets his answer, anyway; and this time Rimmer, shutting the tap off without drying his hands, even looks up long enough to give it to him.

"His Lister wouldn't let him go."

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[identity profile] ultrapeach.livejournal.com 2009-10-13 07:59 am (UTC)(link)
Nice writing... I enjoyed reading this!

[identity profile] smaych.livejournal.com 2009-10-13 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I really liked this. The last line feels really bitter and loaded. There are so many little details in this that feel so right. Thanks for writing it!

[identity profile] lemmesay.livejournal.com 2009-10-13 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a great story. I like the idea and love the writing. Especially the curls-bit:). Poor Rimmsy. he deserves to be treated by his Lister like that.
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[personal profile] erinptah 2009-10-14 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. I love the little details, and the way it all fell together at the end.

[identity profile] vejgeta9.livejournal.com 2009-10-14 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
It was very nice. 3 out of 4.

[identity profile] benvolio-daemon.livejournal.com 2009-10-14 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohh, this was great! That last line made my heart clench up a little bit, which is unusual for me in this fandom - I have trouble wrapping my head around Red Dwarf angst. But this was perfect!

[identity profile] tsukinobun.livejournal.com 2009-10-28 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
I love it. Very succinct, nice lead-up, very emotional. Lovely. <3
And very in-character.
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[personal profile] laurenthemself 2010-01-08 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Times like this I like being behind on this comm, because I can binge on all the lovely, lovely fic people have posted.

This was yummy. Thank you :)