Fic - Broken

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

This story came to me in a dream the other night and I had to get it down on paper.  I'm sorry if there are any continuity errors or mistakes - I've thrown it down really quickly.  And there is angst.  Lots of it.  Someone please tell me how to write fluff because my brain cannot compute.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/1004344/chapters/1990035

Comments

[janamelie.livejournal.com]

That was just so absorbing. I found myself reacting much like Lister, pitying his alternate whilst being deeply discomfited by his presence and trying not to imagine exactly what had happened to him. Good choice to keep it fairly vague and let the reader's imagination supply the details.

And although you gave his death the gravitas it deserved, the sweet ending with our Lister and Rimmer was a blessed relief.

(God, I need fluff now.)