We're Just Beginning (Lister/Rimmer, NC-17, Ch. 6 of ?)

[rosecathy1.livejournal.com]

We're Just Beginning (AO3 Link)
Lister/Rimmer, NC-17
In which I try my hand at (partial) Kryten POV :p

Comments

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

I love his stupid gerbil face too :-)

[rosecathy1.livejournal.com]

<3 I could write so much bad poetry about his face. Or maybe Rimmer could as a 100th-anniversary present...

[janamelie.livejournal.com]

Awww, Lister's adorable face. <3

I like the way you've tried to show that Kryten does have some grounds for his irritation. Lovable though L/R is, it can't be much fun for the others to witness.

Although I love it, of course. :)

[rosecathy1.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I guess they're pretty gross :p But seriously, I see Kryten as having parent-like worries in addition to the jealousy and "ew, sex" and "ew, Rimmer." He's genuinely worried that Lister will get his heart broken again.