This continues to be hugely enjoyable. Yay for the cameos from Kochanski and Petrovitch. I also love the running joke about the two playrooms. :D
The sex scene was extremely hot but also a little ominous, which was obviously your intention. I like how you're slowly building the various tensions in their relationship; it's all very believable and true to their characters. Although I'm slightly dreading the inevitable angst, I know it will be compelling and well-written. :)
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I am also loving the authenticity of Rimmer and Lister's dynamic together as parents.
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The sex scene was extremely hot but also a little ominous, which was obviously your intention. I like how you're slowly building the various tensions in their relationship; it's all very believable and true to their characters. Although I'm slightly dreading the inevitable angst, I know it will be compelling and well-written. :)