Fifty Shades Update

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

Two more chapters added on Ao3!

http://archiveofourown.org/works/2408453/chapters/5514011

Comments

[rosecathy1.livejournal.com]

Question: Do you picture your Kochanski as KK1 or KK2?

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

Neither! I always picture her as my headcanon bookverse! Kochanski :-)

[lordvalerymimes.livejournal.com]

Oh why does it always have to end? I just want to keep reading and reading. :D

I am also loving the authenticity of Rimmer and Lister's dynamic together as parents.

[janamelie.livejournal.com]

This continues to be hugely enjoyable. Yay for the cameos from Kochanski and Petrovitch. I also love the running joke about the two playrooms. :D

The sex scene was extremely hot but also a little ominous, which was obviously your intention. I like how you're slowly building the various tensions in their relationship; it's all very believable and true to their characters. Although I'm slightly dreading the inevitable angst, I know it will be compelling and well-written. :)