Fic - Flying. Rimmer/Lister. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

This is a bit of an odd thought exercise. The topic of RD as the Flying Dutchman came up in a conversation with kahvi, and I wanted to try it out. Needless to say, concrit could really help this one sit more solidly.
Set in VII. Spoilers up through Beyond A Joke. A recasting of Blue.

I will see you again, my friend.

Comments

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, but this was wonderful! I might have concrit; I'm too tired to tell. All I know is that this was all kinds of good, and just what I needed right now.

I'll be back for some detailed feedback later, just wanted to check in. :)

"Rimmer... man... what the smeg are we doing?"
*smack* I *smack* though *smack* I *smack* told *smack* you *smack* to stop *smack* doing *smack* that!!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Mmm, I love detailed feedback - thanks in advance!

Well, let's be fair to Lister - it all did happen too fast. That's one of the things I take away from the Wagner version. The captain sees Senta talking with her boy, freaks out, and splits, while Senta is running after him and saying, "Dude! You have it all wrong!"

Details!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Daaf Licher is hawt. Don't ask me how I know this, it just felt that way. In my brain. Yes.

The Miners of Jove - inspired genius.

"when I have left this earth and this body behind, and am naught but light, we will meet again among the stars."
*happy romantic sigh* And it's truuueee!

Great Rimmer/Lister interaction. Geez, why didn't you script Blue?

Kiss details - yum. Makes me happy.

"Rimmer... man... what the smeg are we doing?"
*eyes Lister again*

Lovely, lovely...

Re: Details!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Dear lord. Sorry, I was off being killed by a video clip. Oh. Yes. Fic? Fic.

Heh.

Aww, thanks! I was trying for something halfway between the dream and the waking of Blue. I thought Lister might be livin' somewhere around there...

Re: Details!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

He does! And he's in my head! So wait... Does that mean hawt "Blue" snogging goes on in my head?

...

Well, it does now, at any rate.

Re: Details!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Yes'm. And hot smegup snogging, now, too.