Fic: Worlds. PG. R/L, implications of R/L, implications of R/L.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

A post-Stoke Me A Clipper fic. Spoilers up through there.
Concrit always appreciated, especially in this one for voice and pacing. I find it so much easier to write Rimmer as smug bastard/git, and I'm never quite sure how to evolve his voice as Ace.

My name is Arnold, you batty machine.

Comments

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Of course - the blue hair! Hah; didn't catch that one. Nice. ;)

I felt quite sorry for this Lister too, I'm not sure why. Well, there's the fact that Ace basically took advantage of him. :/

Guh - I'm trying to make my response-story (so to speak) balance between too depressing and too sappy. It did start out as "Too Much" and ended up as "Home", so I think it's going in the right direction. Might post soon, because I need to get it out of my system!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, I agree - I wanted Arn to say that outright, because I think it is indeed wrong to just take advantage of that Ace position, and then to run off and not tell him the whole Ace story. It was unfair to that dimension's Lister, and it was unfair to that dimension's Rimmer, as well.

*eagerly awaits*