ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-05-02 11:44 am

Fic: Understanding - R/L - R - Part 2.

Title: Understanding
Authors: [livejournal.com profile] kahvi & [livejournal.com profile] roadstergal
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: R (for this part)
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf, or make money for it, which explains why there has only been one onscreen kiss between the boys.
Spoilers: Anything up through Legion.
Notes: This is part 2. If you haven't read Part One, this part will not make much sense.

Erm... *glancing at rating* It isn't for excessive violence.
[livejournal.com profile] kahvi says she nagged me to make this happen. Ja, twist my arm! :)

Sniping and bickering and fighting. God knows they were good at it!

[identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com 2006-05-02 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, yes! I've been looking forward to this. The 'making it all better part'. As usuall you didn't disappoint.

pickled sprouts
HA! (And ewww).

"You..." Lister swallowed. "I'd broadcast me love for you to the universe, if you'd let me." He moved closer, wishing he hadn't said that. What sappy nonsense. It annoyed him to the core that it was utterly, absolutely true.
Awww! *melts*

Now another one! *Hmmm.... I don't write myself , but want the writers to deliver constant fic... Kindda selfish...*

[identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com 2006-05-02 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, and sex bit was really hot!

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-05-02 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Wasn't it though? I feel this was all Rimmer's show, and what a show!

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-05-02 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, there's a reason I nag [livejournal.com profile] roadstergal to do these; it's more fun than you can imagine... Please keep pestering! ;D

Yay, my cheezy line got an "aaawww"! Hurrah! It's just like he says, it's sappy, but oh-so-true. :)

Glad you enjoyed!

(Anonymous) 2006-05-02 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Had anyone told him, even a year ago, that he'd be sitting here, with Rimmer waving his privates at him...

That really shouldn't have made me laugh as much as it did.

I loved everything about this - the voices were right, the mood was right and the sex was hot.

Very sexy!

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-05-03 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Very glad you enjoyed it! Thanksf for feeding back. :)

[identity profile] lady-draco.livejournal.com 2006-05-03 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
I ... you ... er ... what ... sex ... OMG ... I'm lost for words.

*composes herself*

That was hot. Hotter than hot. Hot in terms of hot OMG hot. *fans herself* Gahhhh! Rimmer taking control ... OMG. *melts into puddle* I am going to read this again when I get home. In the privacy of my house. :|

On a side note:

Rimmer waggled his tadger. "Is this a 'holo-thingy'?"

Do you intend to kill me, Caz? Like seriously. Lines like that should not be in my vision range when I'm drinking water. A co-worker had to pat my back for awhile so I could stop heaving.

Good work, guys =)

*runs off to have a cold shower*

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-05-03 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
Holo-thingy indeed! Nearly killed me too.

I'm glad you liked the sex, and yes, it was OMG hawt - but I hope that doesn't mean I write better after a sleepless night at 8 AM. :/ Because that would be scary, and not very healthy. Hehehehe...

Thank you - glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] lady-draco.livejournal.com 2006-05-03 09:13 am (UTC)(link)
*falls of chair*

Gah! I just read it again and it was like 10 times hotter than I read it the first time. *gurgles* Sex! Gahhh! Yummmeeee.

[identity profile] shivvlan.livejournal.com 2006-05-03 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
I want to make a wildly awesome comment that will declear exactly how much i loved this fik part...but everyone else has already said everything. Well, everything except the sex scene isn't quite so hot when you're ambushed from behind by a 4-year-old who latches onto your neck and screams 'Chocolaaaaaaaaaaaate!' in your ear.
Second read through was much better =P

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-05-03 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
:D

I'm very glad you liked it!