Fic: Kryten. Implications of R/L. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Gapfiller for Blue. Spoilers up through that episode. Concrit always very much appreciated.

Oh, how Kryten longed for the good old days!

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[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

*twitch twitch*

And all of a sudden I loathe Kryten.

Nicely written story--though I may have a tough time getting to like Kryten again. ^^;

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

from his limited research
*snorts*

He had let the storage area fall into disorder; he had not been down to clean in months
Uh oh... This ain't a good sign...

while Mister Rimmer would try to insert major appliances into Mister Lister
*coughs*

a grey, featureless table
Still always makes me sad, that room...

I am only writing this down because I know I will have editorial control over the contents of this diary when a time comes for a film to be based upon it
Oh, Arn... He's so sweet.

I almost asked him if it was to be the chicken or the rabbi suit this time
I don't want to know.

It's your choice what to do with it when you find it.
And he took that away...

Last line. Killer.

[kirke-novak.livejournal.com]

GASPS! I knew that! Kryten is even a bigger bastard than I suspected! That two legged condom dispencer! *wipes a tear* and we all now know who to blame - Kochanski! Kryten!

Very sad though at the same time, hilarious. Once again - 'Rimmerworld', WHAT were they thinking!?!?! O_o

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

KRYTEN! *chases after him with a long stick with very sharp nails sticking out* You bastard!

Er ... right ... *composes herself*

Great story mate. I think it's wonderful that you manage to make me hate a character - that's gifted story telling. Good stuff, little one :)

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Ssssssssssssssss..............Evil!
*ahem* Lovely story :)

[squiggle-bat.livejournal.com]

What a complete and utter bastard!

"Painfully neat handwriting"

Just as with his wonderful revision timetables, one could just imagine a young Rimmer focussing on making his handwriting perfect to cover the fact he's got no idea what to write about in his exams!

"And any lingering sexual desire I might have had for Lister is rapidly being cured by the fact that he is picking bits of curry out of his teeth with a set of medical forceps that I am not sure if he washed first."

This has got to be my favourite line in the whole thing. I choked on my tea while reading it :D

One thing - did Kryten discover beforehand that Rimmer had gone on to be Ace, or was he reacting purely to Lister's changing memories?