The Great Unnamed Red Dwarf Fik

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

I've decided to flash the first chapter of my Red Dwarf fik (which has no name) because i keep saying i'm writing it and by now everyone will have stopped believing me. =P

Concrit is more than welcome--I can't seem to really get ahold of the chars so the story might be a bit off balance. Any help would...help.

So:

Name: The Great Unnamed Red Dwarf Fik
By: shivvlan
Length: ...too long. Make sure you have time.
Pairing: None as yet. Eventually Rimmer/Lister (if they agree--bloody chars)
Summary: The universe is a big, big place. Sometimes you get lost in it.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Wonderful story. I'm glad you decided to post what you had. I think you got Rimmer very well, and you managed to balance the angst with the humor nicely.
Just one wee thing: you seem to be undecided on wheter Holy is male or female. It's deffinetly a she in the begining and then somewhere along the line.....
Go on and write the rest of it then, I'll be waiting. Eagerly. If they refuse to behave, just beat them into submission.

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Oh, and Rimmer as a God? What a disturbing (yet strangely appealing) idea!
Lister as his Holy sidekick? Marvelous!

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

I know I have a problem with Holly. Originally I was sticking to the TV show and Holly was supposed to be the female version, but I found that i just kept turning her into male Holly, so in the end I gave up and let it go. It was male Holly who wanted to be in the story, so who am i to argue ^^;