The Great Unnamed Red Dwarf Fik
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I've decided to flash the first chapter of my Red Dwarf fik (which has no name) because i keep saying i'm writing it and by now everyone will have stopped believing me. =P
Concrit is more than welcome--I can't seem to really get ahold of the chars so the story might be a bit off balance. Any help would...help.
So:
Name: The Great Unnamed Red Dwarf Fik
By:
shivvlan
Length: ...too long. Make sure you have time.
Pairing: None as yet. Eventually Rimmer/Lister (if they agree--bloody chars)
Summary: The universe is a big, big place. Sometimes you get lost in it.
Concrit is more than welcome--I can't seem to really get ahold of the chars so the story might be a bit off balance. Any help would...help.
So:
Name: The Great Unnamed Red Dwarf Fik
By:
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Length: ...too long. Make sure you have time.
Pairing: None as yet. Eventually Rimmer/Lister (if they agree--bloody chars)
Summary: The universe is a big, big place. Sometimes you get lost in it.
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Date: 2006-07-07 11:16 am (UTC)Just one wee thing: you seem to be undecided on wheter Holy is male or female. It's deffinetly a she in the begining and then somewhere along the line.....
Go on and write the rest of it then, I'll be waiting. Eagerly. If they refuse to behave, just beat them into submission.
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Date: 2006-07-07 11:52 am (UTC)Lister as his Holy sidekick? Marvelous!
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Date: 2006-07-09 05:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-07 06:16 pm (UTC)More?
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Date: 2006-07-08 02:47 am (UTC)*snort* Poor Rimmer, the accidental serial killer, indeed!
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Date: 2006-07-08 07:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-09 05:01 am (UTC)Yes, I do want the quibbles when you're done. And yes, i also know that my continuancy is a bit stuffed up. I mean to be writing season 3 chars, in seas on 5, with stuff from the books.
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Date: 2007-03-01 07:27 pm (UTC)I like lots.