ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-08-14 01:58 pm
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Beast, part 3. R.

Part three of three. Part one here, Part two here. I did take a bit of a plot element from Last Human, because I wanted to play with the implications. R for a little extra squick.

"Are you trying to make me sick, bud?"

Crit is always good. Written for [livejournal.com profile] fanfic100. Little Damn Table.
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[identity profile] nessaancalime.livejournal.com 2006-08-14 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
He, he, a fun little series. There should be a lot of references like that in the series to be used for various stories.
Planning anything further here?

[identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
I shudder to think what the beast would do with the....sample. Um, forget I mentioned it. Wonderful ending to the series.

Poor Listy - he had a sexual encounter with Rimmer and he can't even remember it. Something must be done!
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[identity profile] zekkass.livejournal.com 2006-08-20 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Electromagnet. That doesn't bode well at all.

"Let me get this straight," Lister said, crossing his arms. "We have to wank into the lake. Then it'll let us go."

I. I don't know whether to laugh or be really, really creeped out...

That was good, and a perfect Kryten-ish ending. Goodness.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay liquid beast! I thought it sounded familiar. ;)

"Don't worry - they'd see what a bloody great help you weren't."
Nicely put. By you and Lister both.

His pants slowly slid to the ground.
All too eager to get his pants off... No, wait.

"It picked out the idea of DNA from my bee, and it rather likes the thought. It wants some."
Somehow, this is just so very, very RD.

"this is carbon-based life-form talk, I see."
I love Kryten.

if wanking were a sport, he was in Olympic trim .
Hee!

"Need any help, miladdio?"

"You here to watch, Rimmer?"
It's very, very wrong that I found that whole sequence to be quite... Erm... Yes. Particularly:

A part of his mind pulled out the thought that, if Rimmer had sucked him off, he could just walk into the lake and switch to soft-light in order to make the delivery.
There's something wrong with me, isn't there? *hides*

I do have a wee bit of concrit I might e-mail you later, if you like. :)
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