[identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] reddwarfslash
Part three of three. Part one here, Part two here. I did take a bit of a plot element from Last Human, because I wanted to play with the implications. R for a little extra squick.

"Are you trying to make me sick, bud?"

Crit is always good. Written for [livejournal.com profile] fanfic100. Little Damn Table.

Date: 2006-08-14 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nessaancalime.livejournal.com
He, he, a fun little series. There should be a lot of references like that in the series to be used for various stories.
Planning anything further here?

Date: 2006-08-14 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nessaancalime.livejournal.com
Yes, I was thinking too first time I heard it, that the next time Rimmers hands were near anyones hips, it was Listers. That must have been what Chris was referring to when he said not yet, or?
BTW, when Craig is referring to the on-screen kiss when they look at Rimmers package - is it me or is his voice dropping a bit ;-)

Date: 2006-08-15 06:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nessaancalime.livejournal.com
But that underwear comment obviously for fun and he lowers the voice to enhance the joke. The reference to the kiss is just a commentary to the scene happening, and the lowering of tone is not that obvious, but I swear his voice goes positively sultry, and my oh my does his voice sound lovely like that ::swoooon:: And Chris answering, his voice is always great, of course ::swooning more::

Date: 2006-08-15 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nessaancalime.livejournal.com
He, he, exactly. Love those commentaries...

Date: 2006-08-15 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com
I shudder to think what the beast would do with the....sample. Um, forget I mentioned it. Wonderful ending to the series.

Poor Listy - he had a sexual encounter with Rimmer and he can't even remember it. Something must be done!

Date: 2006-08-15 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nessaancalime.livejournal.com
Listerbeast AND Catbeasts? And we thought Rimmerworld was a scary place ;-)

Date: 2006-08-20 08:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zekkass.livejournal.com
Electromagnet. That doesn't bode well at all.

"Let me get this straight," Lister said, crossing his arms. "We have to wank into the lake. Then it'll let us go."

I. I don't know whether to laugh or be really, really creeped out...

That was good, and a perfect Kryten-ish ending. Goodness.

Date: 2006-08-24 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
Yay liquid beast! I thought it sounded familiar. ;)

"Don't worry - they'd see what a bloody great help you weren't."
Nicely put. By you and Lister both.

His pants slowly slid to the ground.
All too eager to get his pants off... No, wait.

"It picked out the idea of DNA from my bee, and it rather likes the thought. It wants some."
Somehow, this is just so very, very RD.

"this is carbon-based life-form talk, I see."
I love Kryten.

if wanking were a sport, he was in Olympic trim .
Hee!

"Need any help, miladdio?"

"You here to watch, Rimmer?"

It's very, very wrong that I found that whole sequence to be quite... Erm... Yes. Particularly:

A part of his mind pulled out the thought that, if Rimmer had sucked him off, he could just walk into the lake and switch to soft-light in order to make the delivery.
There's something wrong with me, isn't there? *hides*

I do have a wee bit of concrit I might e-mail you later, if you like. :)

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