Beast, part 3. R.
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Part three of three. Part one here, Part two here. I did take a bit of a plot element from Last Human, because I wanted to play with the implications. R for a little extra squick.
"Are you trying to make me sick, bud?"
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"Are you trying to make me sick, bud?"
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Date: 2006-08-14 09:32 pm (UTC)Planning anything further here?
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Date: 2006-08-14 09:37 pm (UTC)Well, I do have... *checks* 87 more fics to go to hit 100!
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Date: 2006-08-14 09:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-08-14 10:19 pm (UTC)BTW, when Craig is referring to the on-screen kiss when they look at Rimmers package - is it me or is his voice dropping a bit ;-)
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Date: 2006-08-14 10:28 pm (UTC)Yes, just as it does in the naked in underwear comment, eh? ;)
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Date: 2006-08-15 04:34 am (UTC)Poor Listy - he had a sexual encounter with Rimmer and he can't even remember it. Something must be done!
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Date: 2006-08-15 04:38 am (UTC)Well, he kinda remembers it. Maybe enough for it to bug his dreams. :p
Thanks! :D
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Date: 2006-08-15 06:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-08-20 08:19 pm (UTC)"Let me get this straight," Lister said, crossing his arms. "We have to wank into the lake. Then it'll let us go."
I. I don't know whether to laugh or be really, really creeped out...
That was good, and a perfect Kryten-ish ending. Goodness.
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Date: 2006-08-20 09:23 pm (UTC)Thank ye! I had a lot of fun with this set of fics.
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Date: 2006-08-24 02:33 pm (UTC)"Don't worry - they'd see what a bloody great help you weren't."
Nicely put. By you and Lister both.
His pants slowly slid to the ground.
All too eager to get his pants off... No, wait.
"It picked out the idea of DNA from my bee, and it rather likes the thought. It wants some."
Somehow, this is just so very, very RD.
"this is carbon-based life-form talk, I see."
I love Kryten.
if wanking were a sport, he was in Olympic trim .
Hee!
"Need any help, miladdio?"
"You here to watch, Rimmer?"
It's very, very wrong that I found that whole sequence to be quite... Erm... Yes. Particularly:
A part of his mind pulled out the thought that, if Rimmer had sucked him off, he could just walk into the lake and switch to soft-light in order to make the delivery.
There's something wrong with me, isn't there? *hides*
I do have a wee bit of concrit I might e-mail you later, if you like. :)
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Date: 2006-08-24 03:47 pm (UTC)The pant-thing just kind of happened while I was writing up the plot points. Hem. I liked the image of semen as currency that Doug put forth in Last Human, but I wanted to add to it the discomfort angle that RD gets into. Yeah, I had that mental image *cough*, and thought I would give it to Lister...
Rimmer was oddly intrigued and denying it like all get-out.