ext_45940 ([identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] reddwarfslash2006-08-20 12:55 pm
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Fic: Return, part 3. PG.

Part 3 of many. Links to previous parts in the fic. Spoilers for the whole Red Dwarf enchilada.

"I just want... to know."

Crit is always good.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-08-28 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hell, she was an electronic lifeform; they should be able to interface, somehow, shouldn't they? But he had not yet had the nerve to bring it up.
Oh dear god... Bunny...

We have to graduate you to important missions soon, for the good of the universe
"Pfffhhh... Yeah. Good of the universe. Can't believe I used to buy that shite." I know Dave. I know. *sigh*

"She taught me to talk better
SHE MUST DIE! *ahem* *calms down* Phew. Right. Just a fic. Just a fic. *hugs self*

"I had loved her before, but man," Lister shook his head, his lip quivering, "I loved her so much more afterwards."
You know, this aspect of Alt!Kochanski and Alt!Lister has always worried me. I think there's a fic coming there. I mean, Rimmer and Lister influenced one another in subtle ways, and were perhaps the better for it... But the sort of complete turn-around this Lister seems to have done for his Kochanski? It seems to be entirely one-sided, and that is not a good thing.

Great Holly in the end. :)

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-08-28 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
There just seems to be an implication of superiority there which I don't like. Yes, Lister has some dubious personal habits that could do with changing, but when it comes to apreciating opera and things like that... Being open to new things and apreciating a wide range of for example music is a very good thing, but I rather got the impression that he turned his back on his old interests, which is not good. It's like he has to change to meet her standards. Well, if that's the case, then she's not attracted to him at all, is she? She just wants someone to dress up to fit her ideals.

[identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com 2006-08-28 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that's an important part of Lister's character, for me; his integrity. He doesn't appologize for or try to hide who he is ("Occupation?" *considers, shrugs* "Bum.") nor does he try to be someone he is not. And he seems to dislike other people who does that kind of thing; consider his reaction to Kryten's transformation in DNA. I wonder what he'd say to Alt!Lister when he realized what he was like?

I really do think Kochanski I was different; they watched movies together and ate in bed, after all. I can't see Kochanski II doing that...