Gestaltfic: Everything You Ever Wanted To Know About Cloning (But Were Afraid To Ask); R

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Title: Everything You Ever Wanted To Know About Cloning (But Were Afraid To Ask)
Authors: kahvi and roadstergal
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: R, for this part
Disclaimer: We do not own any of these fine characters, nor the universe they inhabit. We make no money from this.
Part: 2/2.
Note: Part 1.

So there was a naked body behind him with a Rimmer inside it. He could handle that.

Comments

[slovenlyslut.livejournal.com]

buh, meh, wah...*sniffles* It started out so promising and then the melting...eww.

Don't get me wrong; I really enjoyed it. I love the all texture you put in your writing.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Gawd, the melting... Lister was terrified. "buh, meh, wah...*sniffles*" would have been his sentiments too, easily. *sigh* The poor boys.

Thank ye for reading and feeding back!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Aww, thank you!

And don't worry - Legion comes along not long after. :)

[hazeltea.livejournal.com]

I really loved that story. I read all of your stuff in a short period of time, and I didn't comment on it because it just seemed kind of weird to comment on something that was posted so long ago. Maybe that's just me? Anyway, I thought the pleading Rimmer having such an effect over Lister's conscience was beautifully done. It's typical that Lister has this ordeal of right versus wrong compounded by his need to make Rimmer happy going on internally at moments like this, and Rimmer just doesn't get it, bless him. It's like he forgets that Lister is capable of such subtle, complicated thoughts.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Aww, thank you very much! I wasn't trolling for comments, but it makes me happy to know our work was enjoyed. :D

Listy is all up ons the complicated thoughts. That, and beer.