Lessons in Heroics Chapter 3: Intervalon L/R (NC17)

[kronette.livejournal.com]

Intervalon by kronette
Chapters: 3/? of Lessons in Heroics

Rating: NC17

WARNINGS for this chapter only: Consensual Underage Sex (but it's canon that Lister first had sex at age 12), Spanking, Dom/sub, Mild S&M

Summary: Several things happened to Dave Lister in his formative years that changed the course of his life. At age ten, Lister discovered the wonders of the male penis and the pleasure it could bring him.

Fuck it: I'm tired of picking at this one. Oh, and if you want to know what I used for inspiration, this was it. Onto chapter 4!

Comments

[janamelie.livejournal.com]

This is actually the first time I've read underage sex (I don't count "Hollowed Out" since Rimmer was 16 which is legal here). Oh God, I'm going to hell. :/

The thing is, it's really easy to imagine because Craig looks so young in the early seasons anyway. And as you pointed out, it's canon that Lister was a very early developer sexually.

This is just so intense and overwhelming, but I know I'll have to read to the end just to see what happens.

BTW, regarding the previous chapter - I forgot to say that "the curls surrounding his erection" is the prettiest description of that type of body hair that I can remember reading. :)

[kronette.livejournal.com]

If you're going to hell for reading it, what happens to me for writing it? *huge grin* As the plaque on my wall states: I may be going to hell, but at least all my friends will be there. It was very odd; I didn't really have to de-age him to write this. The young face is still young, and I imagined his dreads in their shorter version, which made him younger. I saw him as short and skinny, with Rimmer being lightly muscled and thin as well. But his voice never changed, which it most definitely should have. Imagine him at 16 through the whole thing if it helps.

I know what it's like to be wary of reading something too intense - Emily Brunson wrote some stunning DS9 stories, and I had to stop reading them. Vivid, intense, and so far outside of what I knew (back in 1996) that I couldn't handle it. To this day, thinking about one of the scenes makes my stomach twist funny; now that is a writer. I apologized to her for not being able to finish reading the story. So I'll understand if you can't or don't want to finish reading this; I can always give you a summary when I'm done so you'll know how it ended.

I thought my description of Lister in the red silk shirt and open leather trousers was particularly hot :) I wish I had an actual visual for that...mmmmm. Water droplets sliding down his chest...mmmm.....