Lessons in Heroics Chapter 3: Intervalon L/R (NC17)

[kronette.livejournal.com]

Intervalon by kronette
Chapters: 3/? of Lessons in Heroics

Rating: NC17

WARNINGS for this chapter only: Consensual Underage Sex (but it's canon that Lister first had sex at age 12), Spanking, Dom/sub, Mild S&M

Summary: Several things happened to Dave Lister in his formative years that changed the course of his life. At age ten, Lister discovered the wonders of the male penis and the pleasure it could bring him.

Fuck it: I'm tired of picking at this one. Oh, and if you want to know what I used for inspiration, this was it. Onto chapter 4!

Comments

[rosecathy1.livejournal.com]

Aksdheywlqjebrbdjwieueoxbzk almost in tears.

This really struck a chord with me because what my mind tends to dream up when it's roaming in Fanfic World is a less intense version of what you've depicted here. The possessiveness, the desperate, lethal adoration. I wouldn't want every story to have that as the endgame (or would I??), but it's always tempting...

[janamelie.livejournal.com]

This is actually the first time I've read underage sex (I don't count "Hollowed Out" since Rimmer was 16 which is legal here). Oh God, I'm going to hell. :/

The thing is, it's really easy to imagine because Craig looks so young in the early seasons anyway. And as you pointed out, it's canon that Lister was a very early developer sexually.

This is just so intense and overwhelming, but I know I'll have to read to the end just to see what happens.

BTW, regarding the previous chapter - I forgot to say that "the curls surrounding his erection" is the prettiest description of that type of body hair that I can remember reading. :)

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

Lister is an unusual character, in that you don't often see someone who is so 'cute' who can also be extremely sexy - people tend to fall into one category or the other. Similarly, he's got that intriguing mix of hardness and softness about him. He can be tough, demanding and self-assured but underneath that he has a real vulnerability too. It's why I've always found him the most interesting character, particularly sexually.

In terms of the underage stuff, well...as you say it is canon. As someone who was also an early developer it doesn't seem too out of place to me. I know from my diaries that I was having fully-fledged sexual fantasies and masturbating at age 11 (although I made a decision fairly young that I didn't want to have sex until I was eighteen and I stuck to that). I can totally see Lister as the kind of boy who would have a go at seducing his social worker :-)