Lessons in Heroics Chapter 3: Intervalon L/R (NC17)

[kronette.livejournal.com]

Intervalon by kronette
Chapters: 3/? of Lessons in Heroics

Rating: NC17

WARNINGS for this chapter only: Consensual Underage Sex (but it's canon that Lister first had sex at age 12), Spanking, Dom/sub, Mild S&M

Summary: Several things happened to Dave Lister in his formative years that changed the course of his life. At age ten, Lister discovered the wonders of the male penis and the pleasure it could bring him.

Fuck it: I'm tired of picking at this one. Oh, and if you want to know what I used for inspiration, this was it. Onto chapter 4!

Comments

[rosecathy1.livejournal.com]

Aksdheywlqjebrbdjwieueoxbzk almost in tears.

This really struck a chord with me because what my mind tends to dream up when it's roaming in Fanfic World is a less intense version of what you've depicted here. The possessiveness, the desperate, lethal adoration. I wouldn't want every story to have that as the endgame (or would I??), but it's always tempting...

[kronette.livejournal.com]

Thank you for sticking with me. I normally don't post WIPs, I wait until the whole story is done. But the darker I get, the more I want to get the chapters out there, maybe to get reassurance that I haven't broken the lads beyond repair. Maybe to force myself to finish the stories. I'm surprised at how easy it was to write Lister; honestly he told me this story on a drive home from work. Maybe the desperation was borne out of watching Lister pine for KK, or his depression in "Dear Dave," and me wanting him to have something to cling to. They both need, and even on a ship full of people, why not each other?

I also feel like I'm writing the characters too OOC, though it's to be expected in an AU doesn't mean I particularly like it. I pictured it like this: you take the Horsemen episodes of Highlander, mix in "Demons and Angels" and "Rimmerworld," and these characters are pretty much what you're going to see. As long as I stick to these characterizations, I should be fine.

It's very strange, because this chapter has been essentially done for over two months (I found the text; May 25 is when I said I had it nearly done), but I was waffling on continuing with the next part in this chapter, or breaking it into two parts. It took two months to realize that it needed to be two chapters; this has a completely different feel than the next part will, but this was important and necessary to show now, to understand chapter 5, which will be the last chapter (it better be, or I'll be in the loony bin).