LimmerSmut. Breakings. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

I am waiting for my computer. And talking slash. So I decided to write a smutfic.

No matter what I do, my in-canon smutfics always go back to Stoke Me A Clipper, and that makes them melancholy.

Critique welcome. There's a bit of an odd voice and tense change thing going on, and I dunno if it works.


Would you do this for good old Arn?

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[kahvi.livejournal.com]

*gingerly dons combat boots, studded gloves, ties hair back and flexes muscles, such as they are*

Oi! Lister! The Lister in roadstergal's head! Get over here!

*runs after him and gives him good kicking*


ANGRY! OMG, so angry! And it's because I can absolutely see Lister doing that. Had it been even slighty out of character, but no. The smeghead! OK, so in his defense, he had no idea of knowing Arn would find out that'd he'd erased his memory. *sigh* Still, it's the whole situation. He doesn't understand Arn. Doesn't understand his thought-processes.

Heheh... I shouldn't get this emotional over fic, but I do when it's good! :D

But none of the girls who have reluctantly kissed me
Idiots. Hehe... Still angry!

would you do this for good old Arn?
You think too much, Arn. Stop it!

OMG... The kiss details! The *hides under bed* ...Other details! You do them so well. *sigh*

Angry now! Heheh...

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

And here is the goodly fic that you were working on last night.

Ahhh, wonderful as usual. Rimmer ... sometimes I just want to strangle him. Other times, I just want to hug him. In this case, I want to hug him.

Well done =)