[identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] reddwarfslash
I am waiting for my computer. And talking slash. So I decided to write a smutfic.

No matter what I do, my in-canon smutfics always go back to Stoke Me A Clipper, and that makes them melancholy.

Critique welcome. There's a bit of an odd voice and tense change thing going on, and I dunno if it works.


Would you do this for good old Arn?

Date: 2006-03-19 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
*gingerly dons combat boots, studded gloves, ties hair back and flexes muscles, such as they are*

Oi! Lister! The Lister in [livejournal.com profile] roadstergal's head! Get over here!

*runs after him and gives him good kicking*


ANGRY! OMG, so angry! And it's because I can absolutely see Lister doing that. Had it been even slighty out of character, but no. The smeghead! OK, so in his defense, he had no idea of knowing Arn would find out that'd he'd erased his memory. *sigh* Still, it's the whole situation. He doesn't understand Arn. Doesn't understand his thought-processes.

Heheh... I shouldn't get this emotional over fic, but I do when it's good! :D

But none of the girls who have reluctantly kissed me
Idiots. Hehe... Still angry!

would you do this for good old Arn?
You think too much, Arn. Stop it!

OMG... The kiss details! The *hides under bed* ...Other details! You do them so well. *sigh*

Angry now! Heheh...

Date: 2006-03-19 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
OK, so I've had a talk with the Lister in my head (am sane... am sane...), and he want's to tell his side of the story. Would you mind if I wrote that? Apparently, he's quite angry too.

Date: 2006-03-19 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
Gah! *shoots self for bad grammar* Wants.

Date: 2006-03-19 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
I know, I know. But you know, I identify with the character, so it makes me angry when he does stupid things. If that makes any sort of sense.

I mean, would Lister be squicked at kissing Rimmer if they've had carnal knowledge in the past?
Well... I dunno. That's the beauty of an SF universe though; virtually anything can make sense if you want it to. I do think your handling of it was quite ingenious though; if he'd erased the memory of it, that would actually go towards explaining his dream (and his feelings) in "Blue". I might borrow that idea for a fix later, if I may?

Date: 2006-03-19 11:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
I just realized I wrote "fix", not "fic". Didn't even notice. Freudian slip, anyone?

"Dude... You gotta help me out, I need my RD fix, man! I'm hurtin' here!"

Date: 2006-03-20 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-draco.livejournal.com
And here is the goodly fic that you were working on last night.

Ahhh, wonderful as usual. Rimmer ... sometimes I just want to strangle him. Other times, I just want to hug him. In this case, I want to hug him.

Well done =)

Date: 2006-03-20 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-draco.livejournal.com
I think you can sort of manipulate your arms to do it.

*tries it*

Yup. Tis weird but it can be done ...

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