Fic - Lingering. PG. R/L implications.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

This is in the same thread of fics with Appliance and Lies, which bracket Terrorform.

"What the smeg are you doing, Lister?"

Comments

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

Nice. Thought provoking to an extent; bit of a hopeless feel to it. I liked the last bit, it conveyed alot while not really going into detail about it.

Once again a wonderful fik.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Awww, thanks!

Because of SMAC, I feel frustration as a companion to RD slash a lot of the time... *sigh*

[kirke-novak.livejournal.com]

The conversation about human feelings vs machine's feelings was very inspiring. Come on, admit it, you are just GOOd at what you're doing :D

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh my... *blush*

Thanks! I do feel that's something that's skirted around in the show, and I wanted to play with it a bit.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Sometime between the almost-off indigo of night and the grimy purple of morning, Lister would fall into snoring repose, a can of lager typically balanced gently in his armpit.
This is me after we've finished writing. ;)

Lister sleeping in his bunk... *happy sigh*

Rimmer lay in the observation bubble, watching the stars.
Yay observation bubble! I've missed you!

Lister laughed and turned back to his join-the-dots book.
*dies from the cute*

"Well, they're crunchy, sir. Have you eaten curries here?"
*eeep*

Aaah, boys. Stupid, silly boys... Hm... I do have a story that was originally set in series I that might be tweaked to fit in after this one... It was inspired by "Appliance" after all...

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, and of course I loved it. :)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the lovely feedback! Hmm, now I'll have that mental image whenever we write. ;)

I miss the observation bubble, too. I think it went the way of the bunk scene (looks at fictional boys and shakes head).

Yay! I'm dying to see Lister's take on some of this. I wasn't sure if it was clear that he was masturbating in Rimmer's bunk while Rimmer was gone, but I didn't think it worked to make it anything but somewhat implied.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, trust me, it was clear to everyone but Kryten. And only barely that! It's wrong that I started thinking "well, tumeric isn't what gives it color anyway; it just changes the color (insert long mental rambling about curry preparation)." I mean, I realize that was sort of the point. ;)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, good. Yes, I wanted it to be a highly lame excuse... and Kryten is so easily reassured by Lister!