Fic - Lingering. PG. R/L implications.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

This is in the same thread of fics with Appliance and Lies, which bracket Terrorform.

"What the smeg are you doing, Lister?"

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[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the lovely feedback! Hmm, now I'll have that mental image whenever we write. ;)

I miss the observation bubble, too. I think it went the way of the bunk scene (looks at fictional boys and shakes head).

Yay! I'm dying to see Lister's take on some of this. I wasn't sure if it was clear that he was masturbating in Rimmer's bunk while Rimmer was gone, but I didn't think it worked to make it anything but somewhat implied.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, trust me, it was clear to everyone but Kryten. And only barely that! It's wrong that I started thinking "well, tumeric isn't what gives it color anyway; it just changes the color (insert long mental rambling about curry preparation)." I mean, I realize that was sort of the point. ;)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, good. Yes, I wanted it to be a highly lame excuse... and Kryten is so easily reassured by Lister!