LimmerSmut. Breakings. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

I am waiting for my computer. And talking slash. So I decided to write a smutfic.

No matter what I do, my in-canon smutfics always go back to Stoke Me A Clipper, and that makes them melancholy.

Critique welcome. There's a bit of an odd voice and tense change thing going on, and I dunno if it works.


Would you do this for good old Arn?

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[kahvi.livejournal.com]

*gingerly dons combat boots, studded gloves, ties hair back and flexes muscles, such as they are*

Oi! Lister! The Lister in roadstergal's head! Get over here!

*runs after him and gives him good kicking*


ANGRY! OMG, so angry! And it's because I can absolutely see Lister doing that. Had it been even slighty out of character, but no. The smeghead! OK, so in his defense, he had no idea of knowing Arn would find out that'd he'd erased his memory. *sigh* Still, it's the whole situation. He doesn't understand Arn. Doesn't understand his thought-processes.

Heheh... I shouldn't get this emotional over fic, but I do when it's good! :D

But none of the girls who have reluctantly kissed me
Idiots. Hehe... Still angry!

would you do this for good old Arn?
You think too much, Arn. Stop it!

OMG... The kiss details! The *hides under bed* ...Other details! You do them so well. *sigh*

Angry now! Heheh...

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

OK, so I've had a talk with the Lister in my head (am sane... am sane...), and he want's to tell his side of the story. Would you mind if I wrote that? Apparently, he's quite angry too.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Gah! *shoots self for bad grammar* Wants.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, go fer it!

I don't think Lister is a smeghead in this; it's just that he can't read Rimmer's mind, and Rimmer still has some of the Rimmer arrogance that makes him think he can read Lister's. I was thinkin' that Lister was hoping that the snog and blow would lead to some hot Rimmer-fucking, and the way Rimmer acted - well, without knowing his thoughts, it's mixed messages.

Thank you for the comments! You know, I only wrote Lister-kiss from Rimmer's view once, and I kinda glossed the details, but that's cheating. Kissing a smoker, if you're a non-smoker, really is pretty grotty, and I don't think lager and curry would help it any (yes, I'm getting flashbacks of Mr. Barrie's commentary from Blue - you need to get that DVD!). But even an untasty kiss can still be a good kiss...

As lovely and squeeworthy as Blue was, though, it really throws canon fics for a loop. I mean, would Lister be squicked at kissing Rimmer if they've had carnal knowledge in the past? So I wrote my Monster and Cold arcs as AU, even though that bugs me. :p But they do have some way to erase memories in RD - cue Season II - so there we go.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I know, I know. But you know, I identify with the character, so it makes me angry when he does stupid things. If that makes any sort of sense.

I mean, would Lister be squicked at kissing Rimmer if they've had carnal knowledge in the past?
Well... I dunno. That's the beauty of an SF universe though; virtually anything can make sense if you want it to. I do think your handling of it was quite ingenious though; if he'd erased the memory of it, that would actually go towards explaining his dream (and his feelings) in "Blue". I might borrow that idea for a fix later, if I may?

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

I gotcha. Although - I identify with Rimmer, and when he does something stupid, I mostly just feel resigned. ;)

Oh, ja, we just toss ideas back and forth and see what comes out. :D

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I just realized I wrote "fix", not "fic". Didn't even notice. Freudian slip, anyone?

"Dude... You gotta help me out, I need my RD fix, man! I'm hurtin' here!"

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Hot Dwarf injection!