I enjoyed this. It's a neat take on Rimmer; almost Arthur Dent-ish, in a way. I'm not sure if that makes sense. Well written. Tasty!
Teeny bit of concrit; while I loved the Marooned memory (the hotness!), it seems odd to me that Rimmer would remember situation without any bittersweetness seeping in. After all, one of the worst things Lister ever did to him happened while they were there; I found it a little off that he doesn't mention this at all, here.
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Date: 2008-01-02 07:11 pm (UTC)Teeny bit of concrit; while I loved the Marooned memory (the hotness!), it seems odd to me that Rimmer would remember situation without any bittersweetness seeping in. After all, one of the worst things Lister ever did to him happened while they were there; I found it a little off that he doesn't mention this at all, here.
But yes, good!