I swear, your Lister is so beautiful it almost makes me cry. How do you write him like that, being so unlike him? :D
I mean, seriously: I missed ya, man. I had dreams about you. I tried to start over, make a clean slate alone, but, well… you can’t control your feelings. Then Ace came, and I thought he was you, and I was gonna tell you how wrong I’d been, and ask you t’stay. Holly was right all along, ya know. I thought I was sane by now, but without you, it’s not enough. None of this is enough without you, do you understand? I felt like I’d killed you. Given you the death sentence. I’ve got a second chance now, and I’ll never make the same mistakes again. Please, just come back to our room.”
It's just the right balance in every way. It's how I hope my version comes across, if I'm lucky.
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Date: 2008-08-10 06:00 pm (UTC)I mean, seriously:
I missed ya, man. I had dreams about you. I tried to start over, make a clean slate alone, but, well… you can’t control your feelings. Then Ace came, and I thought he was you, and I was gonna tell you how wrong I’d been, and ask you t’stay. Holly was right all along, ya know. I thought I was sane by now, but without you, it’s not enough. None of this is enough without you, do you understand? I felt like I’d killed you. Given you the death sentence. I’ve got a second chance now, and I’ll never make the same mistakes again. Please, just come back to our room.”
It's just the right balance in every way. It's how I hope my version comes across, if I'm lucky.
I can haz NC-17 ending nao? :D :D