Also, I really like how subtly you introduced the slash element, building up to a crescendo (as it were), it really fitted, and made it seem so in-character and believable. Actually though, all of it seemed IC, really, and, just well, right. not a single false note struck. So, sorry for all the music metaphors, what I'm really trying to say, is that this was ace :D (no pun intended)
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Date: 2009-04-28 06:53 pm (UTC)