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Help!! I'm writing rp slash, and I need help!! The issue: I'm crap at writing sex scenes. It's like I can't get them to feel... real. It's like they come out strained, or fake. It's a C/C fic. I haven't gotten to that section yet, but it would be nice to have a beta, I guess. Craig has had a shower scene with himself, and that turned out better than I thought. And my last fic was, for a lack of a better word, crap. Sure, it was funny crap, but it was still crap. Too much going on. So, help me!!