Fic: Breaking The Chain - Part 1 - R/L - PG-13

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Title: Breaking The Chain
Authors: roadstergal & kahvi
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG-13 (for this part)
Parts: 4
Disclaimer: We don't own Red Dwarf or make money from it - that would be the other gestalt entity. ;)
Spoilers: Pretty much everything. Set post VIII.
Notes: Yes, it's Gestalt-Time again! This time, we present to you a sequel, of sorts, to Spanners; which you can read here:
Part 1.
Part 2.
Hope you enjoy reading it as much as we did writing it. Which was a lot!


Kryten's fears that Mister Lister might leave with Mister Ace and never come back were unfounded. Silly. Very silly. Yes.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Yes! I love Gestalt- Time!
CRAP computers? Lovely. Comepletly do-lally that thing.

He looked at the man seated next to him, all nervous uncertainty and virtually non-existent self-esteem wrapped in a hard-candy shell of neuroses. And this, he told himself, he loved?

Yes, that Rimsy as I remember him.

As soon as he got his persona on, that hair would stop looking like someone's dead pet hamster, and start attracting women, men and non-gendered entities to the point where they would need to be kept in check with gigantic fly-swatters.

Hehehe...Indeedy. *ahem* Very funny line.

Kryten, still looking at each in turn, started stirring Ace's tea with his groinal attachment. Rimmer looked down, eyebrow raised. Hell. He had been looking forward to some tea

Had me laughing out loud. Hell, I almost woke my mom.

Humor aside though it is quite sinister, both the Computer and Kryten...Deranged mechanicals freak me out, even scarier then humans for some reason.
Beautifully written as always guys.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I was scared to keep writing when I read that intro. Some lovely work by roadstergal there!

Always glad to hear I've got Rimmer down, even if it's just from an observational point of view. :)

And the groinal-attachment is always a hit, isn't it? Great fun at parties!

Thank you! :D

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

*blush* Thank you very much!

Yes, there is nothing like a good groinal attachment gag. :D

That was one of the things in my head when writing this - how freaky Ace's computer is. It's all besotted and lovey, but it's the same with every Ace, and there's something eerie about the way it tells Ace that they need to find a replacement soon in SMAC. I wrote that into Worlds, too, but I enjoyed the opportunity to delve into it a little more in this fic. And, of course, Kryten is just nutters in VII.

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

Naked. Check. On cot. Check. Sex. In process.
Best. Line. Ever.

Awesome installment. Once again, lack of downwards scrolling jolted me out of a near trance of reading. I really dislike it when the fik won't scroll down any more.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

It's just very Rimmer, isn't it? Annoyed my inner Lister to no end. Well, in the fic he didn't know, of course. But inside my head. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! That whole no-more-scrolling thing is really the best compliment a fic can get, if you ask me, so thank you. :)

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

T_T but the lack of scroll just keeps happening. Good fiks like these ones should just keep going and going and going <3
=P

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, but they do! Like you wouldn't believe... *sings* Neverending fiiictiooon...

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it enough to be annoyed at the break. The rest is coming very soon, though!. :)

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

Drat those evil/jealous mechanoids! I loved the bit where the Computer was using her sexy!voice when Rimmer was trying to land the ship. Absolutely priceless scene, there. X3

(I waited until all of the parts were released. Otherwise I would have been up all night and day waiting for the next bit. ;P)

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Seriously? Wow, that's a compliment... I wouldn't want to keep you up all night, there's enough of that going on on my side when we write these things. *mumbles something about time-zones*

Hurrah!