Fic: Bursts. PG-13.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

The next fic in the Forwards arc. Links to the previous in the fic. Spoilers for the book Backwards. Rating for language.

I am smegging tired of this crap!

Comments

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

A-haha! I like I direction this is going in. =P

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Heh - well, see if you still do now. ;) Thankee for feedback!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Yes, this does change things, doesn't it? Neato...

I love the image of Lister just toting Rimmer around; just the kind of thing teen!Lister would do. "Wash your hand before you touch my bee!", indeed!

Rimmer's light bee dangled from a cord attached to it - just as the other Rimmer's had dangled, Lister thought, smoking and half-melted. He felt vaguely ill.
I liked this; nicely evocative.

"He was thwipppin' and all while Cat and I were watching."
Hee! Very cute. :)

The downside," Kryten sighed, wiping off excess wax with one edge of the chamois, "is that you would be corporeal."
Priceless. Just priceless.

I'm gonna hold on to what I have for now. I wanna see where you're taking this...

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thankee for feedback! But I still want to see what you have, when it's done...

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Aw, I can't now, it feels all wrong. Heh. I'm a sucker for making things fit into canon, and this is my canon now. My Backwards canon. You know, like the Spanners/BTC universe is basically Series IX.

Rambling. Yes.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, ye gods, if only! *sigh*

Dear Doug:

Please make slash canon. I mean, more canon than it is already.

Thanks,

Carrie